Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-03 and call for sheperd

["Matt Hartley (mhartley)" <[e-mail]>]

Thanks, Ramon.

Changes look good to me!

Cheers

Matt

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Subject: Re: [CCAMP] WG Last Call on draft-ietf-ccamp-flexi-grid-fwk-03 and call for sheperd

Dear Matt, all

Thank you very much for the review and comments, please see inline (aligned with Adrian's reply).

For what is worth, there were some comments that I received post LC, that will also be in next updated version.


El 12/05/2015 a las 0:02, Matt Hartley (mhartley) escribió:
All,

I've reviewed this revision of the document, and I think it's almost ready for publication. I have a few comments (below) but I don't think there's any major issues.

3.1: definition of OTN could be moved up to section 2.2, if you want.
Ramon> Added as acronym, and removed the expansion, thank you


3.2.1: you state that the Nominal Central Frequency Granularity is 6.25GHz, but there's no reference for this. I assume it's in an ITU doc somewhere? If so, it'd be good to say so (and where)
Ramon> Indeed. Much like SWG being 12.5GHz, added [G.694.1]


The document refers to "OTSi signals" in several places, but the definition of "OTSi" includes "signal" :) I don't know whether or not this is normal usage or whether it's worth fixing... but it looks technically wrong to me (like people talking about "PIN numbers" whenever they get cash out of the bank).

Ramon> changed OTSi signals to OTSi


3.2.5, first bullet: "This group of OTSi should be carried over a single fibre." Is that a normal English should, or a 2219 SHOULD? If the former, it might be worth rephrasing to avoid ambiguity.
Ramon> changed to "are" as per Adrian's suggestion


4.2: "The association of the three components a filter, a fiber, and a filter, is a media channel in its most basic form.". It'd be nice to clarify that this is a fiber with a filter at each end - that's not immediately obvious on first reading, especially with the diagram that makes it clear on the next page.

Ramon> Likewise, changed to "association sequence"


The paragraph below figure 8 is... unclear. Is it just trying to say that media channels can be joined together to make a new media channel? Or is there more to it than that?

Ramon> Basically the intent is that one, although it should reflect more to the join of "basic" media channels (defined as an association sequence of filter-fiber-filter as above). This, and the architectural construct being an LSP.  Changed to also use the term "association sequence"

OLD


   Additionally, when a cross-connect for a specific frequency slot is

   considered, the underlying media support is still a media channel,

   augmented, so to speak, with a bigger association of media elements

   and a resulting effective slot.  When this media channel is the

   result of the association of basic media channels and media layer

   matrix cross-connects, this architectural construct can be

   represented as (i.e., corresponds to) a Label Switched Path (LSP)

   from a control plane perspective.  In other words, It is possible to

   "concatenate" several media channels (e.g., Patch on intermediate

   nodes) to create a single media channel.

NEW


   Additionally, when a cross-connect for a specific frequency slot is

   considered, the resulting media support of joining basic media channels

   is still a media channel, i.e., a longer association sequence of media

   elements and its effective frequency slot. In other words, It is possible to

   "concatenate" several media channels (e.g., patch on intermediate

   nodes) to create a single media channel.



   The architectural construct resulting of the association sequence

   of basic media channels and media layer matrix cross-connects can be

   represented as (i.e., corresponds to) a Label Switched Path (LSP)

   from a control plane perspective.



Fig 12: OTSi trail? Did you mean OCh trail?
Ramon> The error comes from the text, since the correct term is OTSi.

OLD


   In Figure 12 a Network Media Channel is represented as terminated at

   the DWDM side of the transponder.  This is commonly named as OCh-

   trail connection.


NEW


   In Figure 12 a Network Media Channel is represented as terminated at

   the network side of the transponders.  This is commonly named as OTSi-

   trail connection.



Fig 14: MLN/MRN needs explaining. Or removing.
Ramon> Removed.


4.3, towards the end: "there must be enough guard band between adjacent OTSis in any media channel to compensate filter concatenation effect and other effects caused by signal layer switching elements". Maybe "...to compensate for the filter concatenation effect and..." or "...to compensate for filter concatenation effects and..."?

Ramon> new text
"there must be  enough guard band between adjacent OTSis in any media channel to  compensate for the filter concatenation effects and other effects caused by signal layer switching elements"


4.8.4: bear in mind that 0 is not a positive integer, and it looks like the definitions involving (2^n) and (2^m) are intended to include the case where n/m is 0.
Ramon> Changed for "n" to say "non-negative integer". For "m", I am leaving it as positive integer, since m=0 would imply an empty frequency slot.


If no further comments, I will proceed to upload these changes for -04 (with other backlogged changes such as affiliation changes, CCAMP WG, Informational, nits, editorial changes , typos, etc. ). Please see the attached diff


Thanks
Ramon