[Detnet] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-yang-14

Xufeng Liu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 09 November 2021 20:06 UTC

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Reviewer: Xufeng Liu
Review result: Ready with Nits

Thanks to authors for addressing the previous review comments.

The updates look good. The followings are a few additional nits:

1) In the model, “container flow-spec” has been changed to “container
traffic-spec”, but the description has not been updated, shown as below:

         container traffic-spec {
             "Flow-specification specifies how the Source transmits
              packets for the flow.  This is the promise/request of the
              Source to the network.  The network uses this flow
              specification to allocate resources and adjust queue
              parameters in network nodes.";

2) Most names of list and leaf-list have been fixes. The following three were
missed: “leaf-list member-apps” should be “leaf-list member-app” “leaf-list
member-services” should be “leaf-list member-service” “leaf-list
member-fwd-sublayers” should be “leaf-list member-fwd-sublayer”

3) Section 10.  Security Considerations would need to include a list of
“sensitive or vulnerable” nodes.  RFC 8349 shows an example.

- Xufeng