Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-remote-id
Alfred Hönes <ah@TR-Sys.de> Fri, 01 October 2010 09:08 UTC
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-remote-id
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I'm in support of this draft as well, in principle. However, on a quick pass over the current version, I now see some of my editorial points raised once in a review of a previous draft version still not being addressed, and new ones having crept in. My apologies, but I doubt I'll be able to compile a detailed report today. Therefore here's an advance notice of the more significant details, where the first perhaps should be discussed: The various definitions in Section 2 still talk about "hosts". In recent discussions on broadband access gateway behavior it has become apparent that, from the perspective of different specifications, such devices have to behave as a "host" on the upstream interface and as a "router" and the LAN side, and for other specifications, this differentiation does not need to be applied. Since the distinction in some context really matters, I reinforce my previous strong suggestion to s/host/node/g . Rationale: For all purposes within the scope of the draft, it does not matter whether a device acts as a router or a host (i.e., its IP forwarding behavior and/or L2 switching behavior), be it in general or per interface. The only focal point of the draft is the device's role in DHCP (client/server/relay agent). Therefore the use of "host" is considered confusing and too restrictive. The more general term, "node", should be used throughout. Section 4, 2nd para: 3x "specified"/"specifies" in a single sentence on two lines -- argh! Please rephrase! I suggest to change: A DHCPLEASEQUERY specified in this document specifies a lease query by Remote ID unless otherwise specified. --- When used in this document, the unqualified term "DHCPLEASEQUERY" indicates a lease query by Remote ID, unless otherwise specified. I'll hurry up to document ASAP all the remaining editorials (like singular/plural mismatches, wrong/missing articles, etc.) in the memo, but please admit it might take me until Sunday to accomplish that. Kind regards, Alfred Hönes. -- +------------------------+--------------------------------------------+ | TR-Sys Alfred Hoenes | Alfred Hoenes Dipl.-Math., Dipl.-Phys. | | Gerlinger Strasse 12 | Phone: (+49)7156/9635-0, Fax: -18 | | D-71254 Ditzingen | E-Mail: ah@TR-Sys.de | +------------------------+--------------------------------------------+
- [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-remote… Ted Lemon
- [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-remote… Ted Lemon
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Niall O'Reilly
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Stephen Jacob
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Ted Lemon
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Stephen Jacob
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Pavan Kurapati
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Mukund Kamath
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Ted Lemon
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Pavan Kurapati
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Alfred Hönes
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Pavan Kurapati
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Ted Lemon
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Stephen Jacob
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Pavan Kurapati
- Re: [dhcwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-dhc-leasequery-by-re… Ted Lemon