Re: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv4-over-dhcpv6-03 - Respond by Dec 9, 2013

Qi Sun <sunqi.csnet.thu@gmail.com> Wed, 27 November 2013 11:14 UTC

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Hi Ian,

Thanks for comments.


On 2013-11-27, at 下午5:50, <ian.farrer@telekom.de> <ian.farrer@telekom.de> wrote:
> 
> Section 8, the sentence beginning ‘The client that intends…’ should read ‘A client that intends….'

[Qi] Will correct it.

> 
> Section 8  - Question regarding the sentence ‘The 4o6 DHCP client MUST NOT request the DHCPv4-over-DHCPv6 Enable Option nor the 4o6 Server Address Option in the Boot-request-v6 message’. I think that this text as written is ambiguous.
> 
> Is it meant to mean that the boot-request-v6-message can contain any DHCPv6 option with the exception of the 4o6 enable and 4o6 server options? Saying that the client may not request certainly implies that the client could include an ORO option alongside OPTION_BOOTP_MSG. Is the intention to allow this?

[Qi] The reason I added this sentence was that it's not necessary for the client to ask for the Enable Option again in Boot-request-v6 message as the DHCPv4-over-DHCPv6 function has been running. The DHCPv4-over-DHCPv6 function status should be refreshed alongside IPv6 configuration process rather than DHCPv4 over DHCPv6 process. 

IMHO, the Boot-request-v6 msg and Boot-reply-v6 msg should only be used for v4-related configuration, which makes it simple.  Would it reasonable to exclude the ORO option in the two messages?
> 
> If not, why exclude requesting the 4o6 server option? Obviously, it’s pointless allowing the Enable option, but sending the 4o6 server option within the BOOTREPLYV6 to allow a dedicated DHCP4o6 server to tell the client to use unicast seems like it could be a good idea. What’s the reason for specifically excluding it?

[Qi] Allowing the client to request the 4o6 server address option would violate the Bullet 4 in section 8: the client only receives the 4o6 Server Address option but no DHCPv4 over DHCPv6 Enable option, then the client is required to ignore the 4o6 Server Address option. 

IMHO, we could make it simple: the server signals the client to use unicast or multicast when the client is enabled to invoke the DHCPv4 over DHCPv6 and it's not necessary for the client to change that.

Best Regards,
Qi 

> 
> There’s also a few other places in the text that need to be aligned with this (the ‘options’ description in Sec 5.2 and paragraph 8 of section 8).
> 
> Thanks,
> Ian
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> From: "Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com>
> Date: Sunday, 24 November 2013 23:02
> To: "dhcwg@ietf.org" <dhcwg@ietf.org>
> Subject: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv4-over-dhcpv6-03 - Respond by Dec 9, 2013
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> Folks, the authors of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv4-over-dhcpv6-03 (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv4-over-dhcpv6-03.txt) believe it is ready for working group last call. Please review this draft and indicate whether or not you feel it is ready to be published. Your input is important! Please respond by Dec 9th, 2013.
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