Re: [dmarc-ietf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmarc-dmarcbis-07.txt

Robert <aradesh@gmail.com> Fri, 29 April 2022 07:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dmarc-ietf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmarc-dmarcbis-07.txt
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A couple of little issues in the ABNF of the formal definition section 5.4:

     dmarc-psd       = "psd" *WSP "=" ( "y" / "n" )
Should be:
     dmarc-psd       = "psd" *WSP "=" *WSP ( "y" / "n" / "u" )

and
     dmarc-test      = "t" *WSP "=" ( "y" / "n" )
should be:
     dmarc-test      = "t" *WSP "=" *WSP ( "y" / "n" )

Also I've noticed that the dmarc-uri definition seems to be missing
the stuff about the file size limitation? At the moment it's just:
     dmarc-uri       = URI
                       ; "URI" is imported from [RFC3986]; commas (ASCII
                       ; 0x2C) and exclamation points (ASCII 0x21)
                       ; MUST be encoded
not sure what it should be.