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Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06

Weijun Wang <weijun.wang@oracle.com> Mon, 29 January 2018 01:06 UTC

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From: Weijun Wang <weijun.wang@oracle.com>
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Date: Mon, 29 Jan 2018 09:06:07 +0800
Cc: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, kitten <kitten@ietf.org>, gen-art <gen-art@ietf.org>, "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>, draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis.all@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06
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> On Jan 29, 2018, at 2:34 AM, Greg Hudson <ghudson@mit.edu> wrote:
> 
> On 01/28/2018 08:41 AM, Weijun Wang wrote:>> Line 1129, "may" should
> probably be capitalized.
>> 
>> 1179?
> 
> No, that one looks okay.  I think I must have meant line 1229: "The
> application may use byte arrays..."

I see. Accepted.

Thanks
Weijun

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