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Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06

Greg Hudson <ghudson@mit.edu> Sun, 28 January 2018 18:34 UTC

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To: Weijun Wang <weijun.wang@oracle.com>
Cc: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, kitten <kitten@ietf.org>, gen-art <gen-art@ietf.org>, "Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com>, draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis.all@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [kitten] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-06
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On 01/28/2018 08:41 AM, Weijun Wang wrote:>> Line 1129, "may" should
probably be capitalized.
> 
> 1179?

No, that one looks okay.  I think I must have meant line 1229: "The
application may use byte arrays..."

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