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Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Wed, 30 April 2014 14:24 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: "adrian@olddog.co.uk" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Hi,

The reason I suggested to expand MIB in the Introduction is because it is expanded in the Abstract. Should the expansion then be removed from the Abstract?

Regards,

Christer

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Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> wrote:


Hi Christer,

Thanks for your efforts.

> Editorial nits:
> 
> Section 1 (Introduction):
>---------------------------------
> 
> Q_1:
>
> s/”two MIB modules”/”two Management Information Base (MIB) modules”

Note that "MIB" is found as "well known" at
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt

Authors, please do not make this change.

Cheers,
Adrian

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