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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-bfd-tc-mib-06

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Wed, 30 April 2014 14:01 UTC

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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Hi Christer,

Thanks for your efforts.

> Editorial nits:
> 
> Section 1 (Introduction):
>---------------------------------
> 
> Q_1:
>
> s/”two MIB modules”/”two Management Information Base (MIB) modules”

Note that "MIB" is found as "well known" at
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt
 
Authors, please do not make this change.
 
Cheers,
Adrian

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