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Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Thu, 01 May 2014 14:45 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: "Nobo Akiya (nobo)" <nobo@cisco.com>, "adrian@olddog.co.uk" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Hi Nobo

>> Section 1 (Introduction):
>> ---------------------------------
>>
>> Q_1:
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>> s/"two MIB modules"/"two Management Information Base (MIB) modules"
>
> Authors had an offline discussion about this one, and concluded that the term is sufficiently well known and modification is not required.

I am ok with that.

But, as I said earlier, shouldn't you then remove "Management Information Base" from the Abstract section, and only use "MIB" there too?

Regards,

Christer

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