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"Nobo Akiya (nobo)" <nobo@cisco.com> Wed, 30 April 2014 19:42 UTC

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From: "Nobo Akiya (nobo)" <nobo@cisco.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, "adrian@olddog.co.uk" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Hi Christer,

Many thanks for reviewing this document!

We have published -07, reflecting your comment.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-tc-mib/

Please see inline for response to each.

> Section 1 (Introduction):
> ---------------------------------
> 
> Q_1:
> 
> 
> s/"two MIB modules"/"two Management Information Base (MIB) modules"

Authors had an offline discussion about this one, and concluded that the term is sufficiently well known and modification is not required.

> Section 4 (Security Considerations):
> ------------------------------------------------
> 
> Q_4:
> 
> The last sentence says:
> 
>        "Therefore, this document has no impact on the security of the Internet."
> 
> That sounds a little funny :) Wouldn't it be better to simply say:
> 
>        "Therefore, this document does not introduce any additional security
> considerations."

Good catch, it does sound a bit funny. We have replaced the text with what you have suggested.

Thanks again!

-Nobo

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