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Re: <draft-ietf-6man-rfc4291bis-09.txt>

DY Kim <dykim6@gmail.com> Fri, 04 August 2017 02:27 UTC

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Subject: Re: <draft-ietf-6man-rfc4291bis-09.txt>
Date: Fri, 04 Aug 2017 11:27:23 +0900
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As someone has already pointed out, the following text in the beginning of page 10 seems to be incorrect:

>    |                           128 bits                              |
>    +-----------------------------------------------------------------+
>    |                          node address                           |
>    +-----------------------------------------------------------------+


I’d think ‘node address’ has to be changed to ‘interface address’.

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