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Re: <draft-ietf-6man-rfc4291bis-09.txt>

DY Kim <dykim6@gmail.com> Fri, 04 August 2017 21:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: <draft-ietf-6man-rfc4291bis-09.txt>
Date: Sat, 05 Aug 2017 06:23:28 +0900
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The first line of Sec. 2.1 also says:

"IPv6 addresses of all types are assigned to interfaces, not nodes."

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DY


> On 4 Aug 2017, at 11:27, DY Kim <dykim6@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> As someone has already pointed out, the following text in the beginning of page 10 seems to be incorrect:
> 
>>   |                           128 bits                              |
>>   +-----------------------------------------------------------------+
>>   |                          node address                           |
>>   +-----------------------------------------------------------------+
> 
> 
> I’d think ‘node address’ has to be changed to ‘interface address’.
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> DY
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