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Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] Change the boilerplate - Kathleen'DISCUSS point 2

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Thu, 10 July 2014 15:09 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MIB-DOCTORS] Change the boilerplate - Kathleen'DISCUSS point 2
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On Thu, Jul 10, 2014 at 03:52:24PM +0200, Benoit Claise wrote:
> Dear all,
> 
> Let's try to address one point at a time, and get closure one by one.
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib/ballot/#kathleen-moriarty
> 
> Kathleen proposes:
> OLD:
> 
>    "The
>    support for SET operations in a non-secure environment without proper
>    protection can have a negative effect on network operations."
> 
> NEW:
> 
>    "The
>    support for SET operations in a non-secure environment without proper
>    protection can have a negative effect on network operations or leave
>    cyber physical devices used by individuals, homes, and business
>    vulnerable to attack."
> 
> 
> I believe this new proposal makes sense. Does anybody object?

Change to "or leave devices vulnerable to attack". Since we talk about
boilerplate, the text needs to be generic.

/js

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