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Re: [netmod] rfc6087bis S4.23 replacement text

Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> Mon, 28 August 2017 21:49 UTC

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From: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>
To: Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com>, Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>, "netmod@ietf.org" <netmod@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [netmod] rfc6087bis S4.23 replacement text
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>> I know that we tend to be sloppy in meetings and often in emails but
>> in written RFCs (specifications) I would personally prefer to use a
>> single term.
>
> So change it in the RD draft to the term we actually use "operational datastore".

A lot of effort went into defining the terms.  Having "foo configuration datastore" (not "foo datastore") is really important, because it binds to the term for "configuration".  FWIW, I think that "the operational state datastore" fell out more for symmetry - because it clearly doesn't bind to either "system state" or "applied configuration" ;)

The end of the 'operational state datastore' term says "This datastore is commonly referred to as "<operational>".   And <operational> expands colloquially to "the operational datastore", albeit one may utter the full expansion if desired. 

So, the net-net (I think) is that, in writing, we have <operational> and "the operational state datastore" but, when spoken, we have "operational" and "the operational datastore".

Makes sense?

Kent // contributor

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