Re: [nvo3] Working Group Last Call and IPR Poll for draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-08.txt

Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com> Mon, 22 October 2018 12:42 UTC

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From: Tal Mizrahi <tal.mizrahi.phd@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 22 Oct 2018 15:41:47 +0300
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Subject: Re: [nvo3] Working Group Last Call and IPR Poll for draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-08.txt
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Hi,


A couple of comments:


1.       I want to thank the authors for addressing the comments about the
Security Considerations section of the previous version of the draft.

2.       Regarding the IANA Considerations section:

a.       [RFC5226] was obsoleted by [RFC8126].

b.       I believe that requiring “IETF Review” is too stringent; “Expert
Review” would make more sense in my opinion.



Therefore, I would suggest the following change:

OLD:

The identifiers 0x0-0xFF are to be reserved for standardized options for
allocation by IETF Review [RFC5226]

NEW:

The identifiers 0x0-0xFF are to be allocated by Expert Review, according to
Section 4.5 of [RFC8126]

Cheers,
Tal.

On Tue, Oct 9, 2018, 12:08 Bocci, Matthew (Nokia - GB) <
matthew.bocci@nokia.com> wrote:

> This email begins a two-week working group last call for
> draft-ietf-nvo3-geneve-08.txt.
>
> Please review the draft and post any comments to the NVO3 working group
> list. If you have read the latest version of the draft but have no comments
> and believe it is ready for publication as a standards track RFC, please
> also indicate so to the WG email list.
>
>
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> We are also polling for knowledge of any undisclosed IPR that applies to
> this document, to ensure that IPR has been disclosed in compliance with
> IETF IPR rules (see RFCs 3979, 4879, 3669 and 5378 for more details).
>
> If you are listed as an Author or a Contributor of this document, please
> respond to this email and indicate whether or not you are aware of any
> relevant undisclosed IPR. The Document won't progress without answers from
> all the Authors and Contributors.
>
> Currently there are two IPR disclosures against this document.
>
> If you are not listed as an Author or a Contributor, then please
> explicitly respond only if you are aware of any IPR that has not yet been
> disclosed in conformance with IETF rules.
>
>
>
> This poll will run until Friday 26th October.
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>
> Regards
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>
> Matthew and Sam
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