Re: [Slim] New wording for the use of the asterisk in draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language

Gunnar Hellström <gunnar.hellstrom@omnitor.se> Mon, 05 June 2017 20:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Slim] New wording for the use of the asterisk in draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language
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Den 2017-06-04 kl. 23:51, skrev Randall Gellens:
> Hi Gunnar,
>
> What I'd suggest is that we include an informational reference to the 
> draft, although that requires that at least an initial version of the 
> draft be published pretty quickly.  So, my suggestion is that you 
> publish at least a skeleton draft right away (which you can revise and 
> extend quickly), and we add text along the lines of the following, 
> perhaps after the second paragraph of Section 5.3:
>
>    Note that separate work [draft-xxx] proposes to use the asterisk (or
>    lack thereof) to convey information between endpoints.
>
> This alerts implementers to the other draft.
This might be a possible way ahead, if others also think it is feasible.

The wording and placement of the text requires more tuning. E.g. it 
should not say "proposes", but rather "specifies".

Gunnar


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