Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-19

Hi Bo,

Thanks for your review...

On Thu, Oct 19, 2023 at 9:58 AM Wubo (lana) <lana.wubo=
40huawei.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
>
>
> Sorry for the late reply. I support WGLC. I have reviewed the document and
> have a few minor editorial comments:
>
> 1. Figure 2 and 3: The basic components of the VN are AP/VNAP and
> vn-member. If the mapping between L1-L8 and AP/VNAP can be showed in Figure
> 2 and Figure 3, it is more clear to me to understand the relationship of VN
> and abstract node (AN).
>

Dhruv: Since these examples are focusing on single VN, I don't think there
would be any added advantage.

> 2. YANG model: It is recommended that the “abstract-node“ under ”vn-ap”
> to add some description on what scenarios is needed, which seems redundant
> with ‘ltp’.
>

Dhruv: A reference to the abstract topology makes the correlation easier
and it is not mandatory.

> 3. JSON Example: The text description of VN3 (Type 1) does not correspond
> to the JSON example. It seems to me:
>
> OLD:
>
> VN Member: 104 (L1 to L4)/107 (L1 to L7) {multi-dest}
>
> VN Member: 204 (L2 to L4)/304 (L3 to L4) {multi-src}
>
> NEW:
>
> VN Member: 103 (L1 to L3)/107 (L1 to L7) {multi-dest}
>
> VN Member: 108 (L1 to L8)/308 (L3 to L8) {multi-src}
>
>
>

Dhruv: I updated the text and JSON as well to reflect the example
correctly. Thanks for spotting this!

Regards,
Dhruv

> Thanks，
>
> Bo
>
>
>
> *发件人:* Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> *代表 *Vishnu Pavan Beeram
> *发送时间:* 2023年9月12日 20:19
> *收件人:* TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>
> *抄送:* TEAS WG Chairs <teas-chairs@ietf.org>
> *主题:* [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-19
>
>
>
> All,
>
> This starts a two-week working group last call on
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/
>
>
>
> The working group last call ends on September 26th, 2023.
>
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>
> Thank you,
> Pavan, Lou and Oscar
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