Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-19

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Hi Tom, all, 

>             "node-id": "192.0.2.1",

Changing to "example:192.0.2.1" would make it a valid URI.

The same fix applies to many similar data nodes in Section 7.

BTW, please note that even the examples in RFC8345 with data nodes of type uri are wrong (see for example https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6900). 

Cheers,
Med

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> From: Teas <[e-mail]> on behalf of Sergio Belotti (Nokia)
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> Hi Pavan, WG,
> 
> I support this work (as contributor)
> and think that it is  ready to move forward as soon as Adrian's
> comments have been successfully addressed.
> 
> <tp>
> I am confused.  Looking at the example in e.g. 7.2 I see
> 
> {
>   "ietf-network:networks": {
>     "network": [
>       {
> ....
>         },
>         "node": [
>           {
>             "node-id": "192.0.2.1",
> If this is the node-id of RFC8345 then that is of type node-id which
> is a URI.  I am not used to seeing URI in this format.
> 
> If I search the rest of the I-D, I do not see node-id.  Rather s.3.1
> has te-node-id which is a different YANG type.
> 
> This confuses me.
> 
> I do have some more, more editorial, comments but am stuck on this
> one.
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> 
> Thanks
> Sergio (as contributor)
> 
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