Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-19

["Wubo (lana)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi all,

Sorry for the late reply. I support WGLC. I have reviewed the document and have a few minor editorial comments:
1. Figure 2 and 3: The basic components of the VN are AP/VNAP and vn-member. If the mapping between L1-L8 and AP/VNAP can be showed in Figure 2 and Figure 3, it is more clear to me to understand the relationship of VN and abstract node (AN).
2. YANG model: It is recommended that the “abstract-node“ under ”vn-ap” to add some description on what scenarios is needed, which seems redundant with ‘ltp’.
3. JSON Example: The text description of VN3 (Type 1) does not correspond to the JSON example. It seems to me:
OLD:
VN Member: 104 (L1 to L4)/107 (L1 to L7) {multi-dest}
VN Member: 204 (L2 to L4)/304 (L3 to L4) {multi-src}
NEW:
VN Member: 103 (L1 to L3)/107 (L1 to L7) {multi-dest}
VN Member: 108 (L1 to L8)/308 (L3 to L8) {multi-src}

Thanks，
Bo

发件人: Teas <[e-mail]> 代表 Vishnu Pavan Beeram
发送时间: 2023年9月12日 20:19
收件人: TEAS WG <[e-mail]>
抄送: TEAS WG Chairs <[e-mail]>
主题: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-19

All,

This starts a two-week working group last call on
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/

The working group last call ends on September 26th, 2023.
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Thank you,
Pavan, Lou and Oscar