Re: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-19

tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> Mon, 16 October 2023 11:10 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
To: "Sergio Belotti (Nokia)" <sergio.belotti@nokia.com>, Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com>, TEAS WG <teas@ietf.org>
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Picking a related e-mail to tack my comment onto

From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Sergio Belotti (Nokia) <sergio.belotti@nokia.com>
Sent: 16 October 2023 10:00

Hi Pavan, WG,

I support this work (as contributor)
and think that it is  ready to move forward
as soon as Adrian’s comments have been successfully addressed.

<tp>
I am confused.  Looking at the example in e.g. 7.2 I see 

{
  "ietf-network:networks": {
    "network": [
      {
.... 
        },
        "node": [
          {
            "node-id": "192.0.2.1",
If this is the node-id of RFC8345 then that is of type node-id which is a URI.  I am not used to seeing URI in this format.

If I search the rest of the I-D, I do not see node-id.  Rather s.3.1 has te-node-id which is a different YANG type.

This confuses me.

I do have some more, more editorial, comments but am stuck on this one.

Tom Petch


Thanks
Sergio (as contributor)


From: Teas <teas-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Vishnu Pavan Beeram
Sent: Tuesday, September 12, 2023 2:19 PM
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Cc: TEAS WG Chairs <teas-chairs@ietf.org>
Subject: [Teas] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-19


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All,

This starts a two-week working group last call on
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang/

The working group last call ends on September 26th, 2023.
Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
This is useful and important, even from authors.

Note: IPR has been disclosed on this document

Thank you,
Pavan, Lou and Oscar