Re: [tlp-interest] Proposed Policy on Rights in IANA Parameter Registry Data

John Levine <johnl@taugh.com> Thu, 17 September 2020 18:13 UTC

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Subject: Re: [tlp-interest] Proposed Policy on Rights in IANA Parameter Registry Data
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In article <F6878352-F6DD-458A-B088-7516ADF415C2@vigilsec.com> you write:
>The second paragraph of the document  Introduction is fine for the Internet-Draft.  After community discussion, what do you
>plan to say here?  Just deleting the second paragraph would leave an incomplete section.  I would prefer to see a proposal
>for the final Introduction and a paragraph that is to be deleted by the RFC Editor prior to publication that talks about
>providing the background to inform discussion.

I think our intention is to add it to the set of licenses that the Trust offers at

https://trustee.ietf.org/licenses.html

R's,
John

>In Section 2, you might point to the message by Steve Crocker at ICANN Chairman during the IANA Transition.  That message
>affirms the stated intent, and IANA was a department of ICANN at the time.

A reference would be helpful.  Can't find it after a few minutes of googlage.

R's,
John

PS:

>Section 4.1, number 2:  It seems wrong to capitalize "You".

It's a quote from existing boilerplate.