Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9453 <draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-16> for your review

최영환 <yhc@etri.re.kr> Fri, 15 September 2023 05:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9453 <draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-16> for your review
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Dear all, 

I agree with the modifications.
Thanks a lot.

Best regards,
Younghwan

> 2023. 9. 15. 오전 10:33, Yong-Geun Hong <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> 작성:
> 
> 
> 2023년 9월 15일 (금) 오전 9:52, Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com <mailto:ek.ietf@gmail.com>>님이 작성:
>> On Thu, Sep 14, 2023 at 4:47 PM Sandy Ginoza <sginoza@amsl.com <mailto:sginoza@amsl.com>> wrote:
>> >
>> > Hi Yong-Geun and Erik,
>> >
>> > I don’t think it’s clear that those words are being used for consistency with the referenced materials and within the industry.
>> 
>> Ah, okay.  Ctrl-f for "master" and for "slave" finds them only ever
>> used within the phrase "Master-Slave/Token Passing (MS/TP)".  There
>> are 3 matches, and one is in the references section.
>> 
>> > > Is there a way to leave it as is but add a kind of a footnote about
>> > > the terminology?
>> >
>> >
>> > Perhaps something like this could be added to the end of the introduction?
>> >
>> > Note that the use of “master” and “slave” have been retained in this document to align with use within the industry (e.g., [TIA-485-A] and [BACnet]).
>> 
>> I think this sounds perfect, thank you!
> 
> I also agree with this modification. Thank you.
> 
>