Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9453 <draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-16> for your review

Yong-Geun Hong <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> Fri, 15 September 2023 01:34 UTC

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Date: Fri, 15 Sep 2023 10:33:50 +0900
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9453 <draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-16> for your review
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2023년 9월 15일 (금) 오전 9:52, Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com>님이 작성:

> On Thu, Sep 14, 2023 at 4:47 PM Sandy Ginoza <sginoza@amsl.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Yong-Geun and Erik,
> >
> > I don’t think it’s clear that those words are being used for consistency
> with the referenced materials and within the industry.
>
> Ah, okay.  Ctrl-f for "master" and for "slave" finds them only ever
> used within the phrase "Master-Slave/Token Passing (MS/TP)".  There
> are 3 matches, and one is in the references section.
>
> > > Is there a way to leave it as is but add a kind of a footnote about
> > > the terminology?
> >
> >
> > Perhaps something like this could be added to the end of the
> introduction?
> >
> > Note that the use of “master” and “slave” have been retained in this
> document to align with use within the industry (e.g., [TIA-485-A] and
> [BACnet]).
>
> I think this sounds perfect, thank you!
>

I also agree with this modification. Thank you.