Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9399 <draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-10> for your review

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Fri, 21 April 2023 21:17 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9399 <draft-ietf-lamps-rfc3709bis-10> for your review
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On 21. Apr 2023, at 21:48, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
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> All - We do not believe that our query regarding ABNF in Section 4.3 has been addressed (see below). Please review and let us know how to proceed with this.

Since you asked “all”: RFC 2397 uses a form of BNF that is taken from RFC 822, but with some gratuitous changes.
This form was already used in RFC 2045 and its predecessors RFC 1521 and RFC 1341.  I do not know the origin of these changes (I find them first in RFC 989 and 1049); they are not mentioned in Section 2 of RFC 2045/1521/1341 — the authors may not have been fully aware that they were changing the notation.  Interestingly, the changes are not used in RFC 2396, which uses the original RFC 822 notation in its recently published RFC 2234 “ABNF” form.  In summary, the snippet copied from RFC 2397 is “almost” ABNF.

I do not see a need (*) to copy the (unfixed for errata) form of the grammar from RFC 2397 — this is probably here because it was in RFC 6170.  (Any reference to this part of RFC 2397 should probably include a reference to the verified errata.)

Grüße, Carsten

(*) another example of the “restatement antipattern” and why it should be avoided.