Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9505 <draft-irtf-pearg-censorship-10> for your review

[Mallory Knodel <[e-mail]>]

Hi all,

I agree with all of the changes unless mentioned below. Thanks Joe and 
Editors!

More:

On 10/30/23 9:49 AM, Dr. Joseph Lorenzo Hall wrote:
>> Also, we suggest rephrasing the preceding sentence if the "instead"
>> phrase should not include "for a limited period of time".
>>
>> Original:
>>     Trade offs: DDoS is an appealing mechanism when a censor would like
>>     to prevent all access to undesirable content, instead of only
>>     preventing access in their region for a limited period of time.  The
>>     latter is really the only uniquely beneficial feature for DDoS as a
>>     technique employed for censorship.
>>
>> Perhaps (where text needs to be provided):
>>     Trade-offs: DDoS is an appealing mechanism when a censor would like
>>     to prevent all access (not just regional access) to undesirable content
>>     for a limited period of time.  ___ is a unique feature
>>     of DDoS as a technique employed for censorship.
>> -->
> I would suggest just deleting that sentence ("The latter is really the only uniquely beneficial feature for DDoS as a technique employed for censorship.")
I would suggest keeping it, but changing the last sentence to read: 
"Temporal impermanence is really the only uniquely beneficial feature 
for DDoS as a technique employed for censorship."
>> b) Please provide a replacement URL. This one is 404 Not Found.
>>
>> Original:
>>     [Sandvine-2014]
>>                Sandvine, "Technology Showcase on Traffic Classification:
>>                Why Measurements and Freeform Policy Matter", 2014,
>>                <https://www.sandvine.com/downloads/general/technology/
>>                sandvine-technology-showcases/sandvine-technology-
>>                showcase-traffic-classification.pdf>.
> This no longer seems to be available.

There are several links that no longer work, but I'm only commenting 
here-- would it be possible to try to find them on the Internet Archive?

-Mallory

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