Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9505 <draft-irtf-pearg-censorship-10> for your review

Alice Russo <arusso@amsl.com> Thu, 02 November 2023 00:17 UTC

Return-Path: <arusso@amsl.com>
X-Original-To: auth48archive@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: auth48archive@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 16199C151071; Wed, 1 Nov 2023 17:17:52 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -6.908
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-6.908 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01, URIBL_DBL_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, URIBL_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001] autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id K8XPPzTPS-iw; Wed, 1 Nov 2023 17:17:46 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from c8a.amsl.com (c8a.amsl.com [4.31.198.40]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 262EEC15C2B6; Wed, 1 Nov 2023 17:17:46 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by c8a.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1258F424CD01; Wed, 1 Nov 2023 17:17:46 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
Received: from c8a.amsl.com ([127.0.0.1]) by localhost (c8a.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id gUPd0ZLPowA1; Wed, 1 Nov 2023 17:17:46 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from smtpclient.apple (50-251-218-18-static.hfc.comcastbusiness.net [50.251.218.18]) by c8a.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id A0267424B432; Wed, 1 Nov 2023 17:17:45 -0700 (PDT)
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 16.0 \(3696.120.41.1.1\))
From: Alice Russo <arusso@amsl.com>
In-Reply-To: <MN2PR06MB6302813E2B4C304DBBB2A57CB1A7A@MN2PR06MB6302.namprd06.prod.outlook.com>
Date: Wed, 01 Nov 2023 17:17:44 -0700
Cc: Mallory Knodel <mknodel@cdt.org>, "amelia.ietf@andersdotter.cc" <amelia.ietf@andersdotter.cc>, "auth48archive@rfc-editor.org" <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>, "ben.jones.irtf@gmail.com" <ben.jones.irtf@gmail.com>, "feamster@uchicago.edu" <feamster@uchicago.edu>, "irsg@irtf.org" <irsg@irtf.org>, "michael.drew.aaron@gmail.com" <michael.drew.aaron@gmail.com>, "shivankaulsahib@gmail.com" <shivankaulsahib@gmail.com>, "rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Message-Id: <FCD61F00-9D15-4108-96EB-47E6A39828C8@amsl.com>
References: <20231028003417.30010B33A7@rfcpa.amsl.com> <MN2PR06MB63029F6D5C825F68E0183205B1A1A@MN2PR06MB6302.namprd06.prod.outlook.com> <C0A01F6E-D038-425B-BFFE-7E9D1B556C08@amsl.com> <CAGVFjM+F_T0f5aVK7EZWUAKxqUyu5F6ii5cSZRV4DRUN6ng_Rw@mail.gmail.com> <MN2PR06MB6302813E2B4C304DBBB2A57CB1A7A@MN2PR06MB6302.namprd06.prod.outlook.com>
To: "Dr. Joseph Lorenzo Hall" <hall@isoc.org>
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3696.120.41.1.1)
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/auth48archive/zTt_z5ohByku6ppuMeMr2dwF2tw>
Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9505 <draft-irtf-pearg-censorship-10> for your review
X-BeenThere: auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39
Precedence: list
List-Id: "Archiving AUTH48 exchanges between the RFC Production Center, the authors, and other related parties" <auth48archive.rfc-editor.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://mailman.rfc-editor.org/mailman/options/auth48archive>, <mailto:auth48archive-request@rfc-editor.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/auth48archive/>
List-Post: <mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
List-Help: <mailto:auth48archive-request@rfc-editor.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://mailman.rfc-editor.org/mailman/listinfo/auth48archive>, <mailto:auth48archive-request@rfc-editor.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 02 Nov 2023 00:17:52 -0000

Joseph,

From this side, no open questions. The Doc Shepherd approval is considered complete on the Section 5.1.1 question because the sentence was updated as Shivan suggested ('Iran' was removed). 

The files are here:
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9505.txt
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9505.pdf
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9505.html
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9505.xml

This diff shows only the most recent changes:
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9505-lastdiff.html
  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9505-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)

This diff shows all changes from the Internet-Draft:
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9505-diff.html
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9505-rfcdiff.html (side by side)

We await any further changes -- and approvals -- from each author before continuing the publication process. This page shows the AUTH48 status of your document:
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9505

Thank you.
RFC Editor/ar

> On Nov 1, 2023, at 3:00 PM, Dr. Joseph Lorenzo Hall <hall@isoc.org> wrote:
> 
> That appears to be the same, good find!
> 
> All, I'm going on vacation starting tomorrow until the following Tuesday and I'll find some time on the planes involved to resolve as many of these that are outstanding. I'm hoping we can then quickly get all author sign-offs.
> 
> --
> JLH, Internet Society, hall@isoc.org ( https://josephhall.org/ )
> From: Mallory Knodel <mknodel@cdt.org>
> Sent: Monday, October 30, 2023 18:34
> To: Alice Russo <arusso@amsl.com>
> Cc: amelia.ietf@andersdotter.cc <amelia.ietf@andersdotter.cc>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>; ben.jones.irtf@gmail.com <ben.jones.irtf@gmail.com>; feamster@uchicago.edu <feamster@uchicago.edu>; Dr. Joseph Lorenzo Hall <hall@isoc.org>; irsg@irtf.org <irsg@irtf.org>; michael.drew.aaron@gmail.com<michael.drew.aaron@gmail.com>; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; shivankaulsahib@gmail.com<shivankaulsahib@gmail.com>
> Subject: Re: [Doc Shepherd] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9505 <draft-irtf-pearg-censorship-10> for your review
>  
> Hi,
> 
> Sorry for the top post. I was browsing this Sandvine research doc that is not the 2014 citation (this is from 2015) but presumably it contains what was originally cited? 
> 
> https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Nirmala-Svsg/post/Anybody-working-on-Internet-traffic-classification/attachment/59d63a5779197b807799782d/AS%3A405810988503040%401473764287142/download/traffic-classification-identifying-and-measuring-internet-traffic.pdf
> 
> Joe I think it was from and early version of the draft so you could tell us if this document could replace the original. 
> 
> -M