Re: [auth48] [AD - Murray] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9277 <draft-ietf-cbor-file-magic-12> for your review

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Fri, 12 August 2022 17:46 UTC

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From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 12 Aug 2022 10:45:53 -0700
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Subject: Re: [auth48] [AD - Murray] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9277 <draft-ietf-cbor-file-magic-12> for your review
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On Fri, Aug 5, 2022 at 1:24 PM Sandy Ginoza <sginoza@amsl.com> wrote:

> Hi Murray,
>
> Please note that the authors have approved this document for publication.
> We await your review of the items described below before announcing the
> RFC.
>
>
> > On Aug 4, 2022, at 7:38 PM, Sandy Ginoza <sginoza@amsl.com> wrote:
> >
> > * ADs, please review the following updates in a comprehensive diff:
> > - Section 1, paragraphs 7 and 12
>

In paragraph 7, can we expand "APK"?  It's not in the RFC Editor's
abbreviation list, it's not defined above, and I don't know what it is.
Apart from that, this is approved.

Paragraph 12 is approved as-is.


> > - Section 2.1, last paragraph
>

Approved.


> > - Global s/1668547090/1668574090 (see mail from Carsten dated 19 July
> 2022)
>

Approved.


>
> —> Note this description is incorrect.  Please review the following
> updates in Section 4.3 and Appendix B (see mail from Carsten dated 19 July
> 2022):
>
> s/0x63470101/0x63740101
>

Approved.

-MSK, ART AD