Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protocol Action: 'QUIC: A UDP-Based Multiplexed and Secure Transport' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-quic-transport-34.txt)
"Martin Thomson" <mt@lowentropy.net> Wed, 26 May 2021 00:07 UTC
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Date: Wed, 26 May 2021 10:07:44 +1000
From: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
To: Martin Thomson via C430 <c430@rfc-editor.org>
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Subject: Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protocol Action: 'QUIC: A UDP-Based Multiplexed and Secure Transport' to Proposed Standard (draft-ietf-quic-transport-34.txt)
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Thanks Lynne, Sorry for missing that. On Wed, May 26, 2021, at 09:48, Lynne Bartholomew via C430 wrote: > Hi, Martin and Jana. > > We are preparing this document for publication. > > Apologies, but one of our questions from earlier in the process fell > through the cracks: > > ECN count / ECN Count (in text, e.g., "3 ECN counts", "three ECN > Counts") > > This document has 22 instances of "ECN count", appearing between > Section 7 and Appendix A.4. There are three instances of "ECN Count" > in text that we suggest changing to "ECN count": I agree that this is the right answer (consistent with others we've made). > 1. At the end of Section 19.3: ... The three ECN Counts; ... Yes. > 2. In Section 19.3.2: ... ECN Counts are only present ... Instead: The ECN Counts field is only present ... > 3. Just after Figure 27: The three ECN Counts are: ... Instead: The three fields in ECN Counts are: ... I should get Jana to check my work though.
- [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protocol Ac… Sandy Ginoza
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Martin Thomson
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew
- [C430] [IANA #1196209] Re: Protocol Action: 'QUIC… Amanda Baber via RT
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Martin Thomson
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Martin Thomson
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Martin Thomson
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Martin Thomson
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Martin Thomson
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Jana Iyengar
- Re: [C430] RFC 9000 - Re: [IANA #1196209] Protoco… Lynne Bartholomew