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Re: [dispatch] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-hardie-dispatch-rfc3405-update-03

Timothy Mcsweeney <tim@dropnumber.com> Wed, 02 September 2020 19:56 UTC

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From: Timothy Mcsweeney <tim@dropnumber.com>
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Subject: Re: [dispatch] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-hardie-dispatch-rfc3405-update-03
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>Is that right?


The first thing I would change in your draft is from this:

3.  IANA Considerations

   This entire document is updated instructions to IANA.



To this:
3.  IANA Considerations

   This update does not change the IANA Considerations in RFC 3405

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-hardie-dispatch-rfc3405-update-03#section-3" name="section-3" rel="nofollow">
 

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