Re: [dispatch] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-hardie-dispatch-rfc3405-update-03

Timothy Mcsweeney <tim@dropnumber.com> Thu, 03 September 2020 10:14 UTC

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From: Timothy Mcsweeney <tim@dropnumber.com>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [dispatch] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-hardie-dispatch-rfc3405-update-03
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Hi Brian,
 
>Re-assuming my hat as a Gen-ART reviewer for this draft, I think that this
>change would be a mistake, as it no longer explicitly informs the reader
>what has been changed in RFC 3405.
 
>If we really want to be precise, I suggest:
 
>2. Updated Requirements
 
>This document removes the normative requirement from section 3.1.1
>of RFC 3405 for registrations in URI.ARPA to be from the IETF URI Tree.
 
>All registrations in URI.ARPA MUST now be for schemes which are
>permanent registrations, as they are described in BCP 35.
 
 
 
Sorry, I want to make my last comment more clear.  
In the interest of brevity, we probably don't really need that second sentence.  And its removal might help to open things up a bit.  So section two would now look like:
 
2. Updated Requirements
 
This document removes the normative requirement from section 3.1.1
of RFC 3405 for registrations in URI.ARPA to be from the IETF URI Tree.