Re: [Dots] WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04

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Hi Yuhei, all,

Thank you for implementing the changes. I have no further comment on the document. I think it is stable and ready to be sent to the IESG. 

Cheers,
Med

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> Envoyé : mercredi 23 février 2022 05:24
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <[e-mail]>; dots
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> Objet : Re: [Dots] WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04
> 
> Hi Med, All,
> 
> I have submitted the latest draft as 09. Comments are welcome.
> 
> Thanks,
> Yuhei
> 
> 2022年2月22日(火) 15:55 <[e-mail]>:
> >
> > Hi Yuhei,
> >
> > The proposed text looks good to me.
> >
> > As "DMS" is not defined in RFC8612 and the telemetry draft, I suggest
> you also make the following change:
> >
> > OLD
> >    The readers should be familiar with the terms defined in [RFC8612]
> >    and [I-D.ietf-dots-telemetry].
> >
> > NEW:
> >    The readers should be familiar with the terms defined in [RFC8612],
> >    [RFC8903], and [I-D.ietf-dots-telemetry].
> >
> > Thank you.
> >
> > Cheers,
> > Med
> >
> > > -----Message d'origine-----
> > > De : Dots <[e-mail]> De la part de H Y Envoyé : mardi
> > > 22 février 2022 01:02 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET
> > > <[e-mail]> Cc : dots-chairs
> > > <[e-mail]>; Valery Smyslov <[e-mail]>; dots
> > > <[e-mail]>; Meiling Chen <[e-mail]>;
> > > draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use- [e-mail] Objet : Re: [Dots]
> > > WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04
> > >
> > ...
> > >
> > > >
> > > > Also,
> > > > (1) Can you please clarify in the text what is meant by "teacher
> > > labels".
> > > [Yuhei] For consistency with the Terminology section, we will update
> > > as below.
> > >
> > >  After mitigating a DDoS attack, the flow collector attaches outputs
> > > of the DMS as labels to the statistics of traffic flow of top-
> talkers.
> > > The outputs, for example, are the "attack-id" telemetry  attributes.
> > > The flow collector, then, carries out supervised machine  learning
> > > to increase its detection accuracy, setting the statistics  as an
> > > explanatory variable and setting the labels as an objective
> variable.
> > >
> >
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