Re: [Dots] WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04

H Y <yuuhei.hayashi@gmail.com> Wed, 23 February 2022 04:24 UTC

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Date: Wed, 23 Feb 2022 13:24:11 +0900
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Subject: Re: [Dots] WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04
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Hi Med, All,

I have submitted the latest draft as 09. Comments are welcome.

Thanks,
Yuhei

2022年2月22日(火) 15:55 <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>:
>
> Hi Yuhei,
>
> The proposed text looks good to me.
>
> As "DMS" is not defined in RFC8612 and the telemetry draft, I suggest you also make the following change:
>
> OLD
>    The readers should be familiar with the terms defined in [RFC8612]
>    and [I-D.ietf-dots-telemetry].
>
> NEW:
>    The readers should be familiar with the terms defined in [RFC8612],
>    [RFC8903], and [I-D.ietf-dots-telemetry].
>
> Thank you.
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Dots <dots-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de H Y
> > Envoyé : mardi 22 février 2022 01:02
> > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com>
> > Cc : dots-chairs <dots-chairs@ietf.org>; Valery Smyslov
> > <valery@smyslov.net>; dots <dots@ietf.org>; Meiling Chen
> > <chenmeiling@chinamobile.com>; draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-
> > cases@ietf.org
> > Objet : Re: [Dots] WGLC for draft-ietf-dots-telemetry-use-cases-04
> >
> ...
> >
> > >
> > > Also,
> > > (1) Can you please clarify in the text what is meant by "teacher
> > labels".
> > [Yuhei] For consistency with the Terminology section, we will update as
> > below.
> >
> >  After mitigating a DDoS attack, the flow collector attaches outputs  of
> > the DMS as labels to the statistics of traffic flow of top-  talkers.
> > The outputs, for example, are the "attack-id" telemetry  attributes.
> > The flow collector, then, carries out supervised machine  learning to
> > increase its detection accuracy, setting the statistics  as an
> > explanatory variable and setting the labels as an objective  variable.
> >
>
>
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