Re: [mile] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Wed, 18 October 2017 22:41 UTC

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From: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 19 Oct 2017 09:41:30 +1100
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Subject: Re: [mile] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-mile-rolie-10
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On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 1:51 AM, Banghart, Stephen A. (Fed)
<stephen.banghart@nist.gov> wrote:
> I've taken your suggestion to clean up the Transport Layer Security section and parts of the Security Considerations section by removing our reinvention of the wheel and leaning more heavily on referencing other RFCs for best practices, it's possible that the cleaned up text contradicts itself less and mitigates the issue. Perhaps more explanatory text around these two core use cases in the authentication section would help too?

Yes, the current document heavily emphasizes client authentication as
a means to control access to the point that any use of the protocol
for public information is lost.