Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-14

"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Thu, 26 October 2017 09:46 UTC

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
CC: Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net>, "netmod@ietf.org" <netmod@ietf.org>, "Sonal Agarwal (agarwaso)" <agarwaso@cisco.com>
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Hi Mahesh, 

On 10/25/17, 9:22 PM, "Mahesh Jethanandani" <mjethanandani@gmail.com>
wrote:

>Acee,
>
>Thanks for reviewing the draft.
>
>> On Oct 25, 2017, at 6:21 AM, Acee Lindem (acee) <acee@cisco.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Kent, Mahesh, et al,
>> 
>> I have read the draft and support publication. I have two comments on
>>the
>> -14 version. 
>> 
>>  1. The tree diagrams do not fit within the draft pages. Note that
>>recent
>> versions of pyang support the —tree-line-length parameter and this may
>> help. 
>
>I used the —tree-line-length=72 as the parameter to generate the tree,
>and that is why you see the line wrap around.

I guess then you need to manually format it so it fits.

>
>>  2. While it is non-normative, I’d prefer to have appendix A.1 removed.
>> It was a mistake for vendors to mix packet filtering and route filtering
>> in the first place and the draft should not insinuate that the model
>>will
>> be augmented to do this.
>
>The example is just an example of how the model can be extended. There is
>no implication that the model will be augmented to support mixing of
>packet filtering with route filtering.

I understand that. However, it is more an example of how it should not be
used. Do you really want to publish this?

Thanks,
Acee

>
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Acee 
>> 
>> On 10/20/17, 5:37 PM, "netmod on behalf of Kent Watsen"
>> <netmod-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of kwatsen@juniper.net> wrote:
>> 
>>> 
>>> All,
>>> 
>>> This starts a two-week working group last call on
>>> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-14.
>>> 
>>> The working group last call ends on November 3.
>>> Please send your comments to the netmod mailing list.
>>> 
>>> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
>>> and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
>>> This is useful and important, even from authors.
>>> 
>>> Could the authors, explicitly CC-ed on this email, please
>>> also confirm at this time that they are unaware of any
>>> IPR related to this draft.
>>> 
>>> Thank you,
>>> Netmod Chairs
>>> 
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>Mahesh Jethanandani
>mjethanandani@gmail.com
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