Re: Proposed Charter Text

Ryan Hamilton <ryan@optimism.cc> Sat, 01 February 2020 19:31 UTC

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From: Ryan Hamilton <ryan@optimism.cc>
Date: Sat, 01 Feb 2020 11:31:19 -0800
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Subject: Re: Proposed Charter Text
To: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>
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On Fri, Jan 31, 2020 at 6:19 PM Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> Additionally, the Working Group will provide guidance on how to enable load
>> balancers to handle QUIC traffic.
>>
>
> SGTM. A minor rephrase: "Additionally, the Working Group will provide
> guidance on how load balancers can be enabled to handle QUIC traffic."
>

That feels a bit clunky to me. What about:

Additionally, the Working Group will provide guidance on how to handle QUIC
traffic in load balancers.


or:

Additionally, the Working Group will provide guidance on how load balancers
should handle QUIC traffic.