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Re: [Xml-sg-cmt] <u>: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9290 <draft-ietf-core-problem-details-08> for your review

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Wed, 07 September 2022 07:35 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Xml-sg-cmt] <u>: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9290 <draft-ietf-core-problem-details-08> for your review
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> *Maybe* we could inline a caveat to warn readers about the possibly
> surprising rendering, depending on their viewer programme.

As in:

OLD:
> The following example shows how the Hebrew-language string

NEW:
> The following example uses right-to-left (RTL) script, which in the context of this specification may be rendered differently by different document presentation environments.  The descriptive text may be more reliable to follow than the necessarily device- and application-specific rendering.
> The example shows how the Hebrew-language string

?

Grüße, Carsten

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