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[Xml-sg-cmt] [AD] Re: <u>: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9290 <draft-ietf-core-problem-details-08> for your review

Sandy Ginoza <sginoza@amsl.com> Wed, 07 September 2022 23:45 UTC

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Subject: [Xml-sg-cmt] [AD] Re: <u>: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9290 <draft-ietf-core-problem-details-08> for your review
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Hi All, Murray*,

The document has been updated with the NEW text shown below.  Based on your replies and the input from Peter and John, we believe there are no objections to publishing the RFC (however the files may display on various applications). 

Authors, please review the files and confirm that you approve the RFC for publication. 

* Murray, please review the updates to Appendix A and let us know if you approve.  


The files are available here: 
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290.xml

Diffs of the more recent updates: 
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290-lastdiff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)

AUTH48 diff: 
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290-auth48diff.html

Comprehensive diffs: 
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9290-rfcdiff.html (side by side) 


Thank you,
Sandy 




> On Sep 7, 2022, at 12:35 AM, Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> wrote:
> 
>> *Maybe* we could inline a caveat to warn readers about the possibly
>> surprising rendering, depending on their viewer programme.
> 
> As in:
> 
> OLD:
>> The following example shows how the Hebrew-language string
> 
> NEW:
>> The following example uses right-to-left (RTL) script, which in the context of this specification may be rendered differently by different document presentation environments.  The descriptive text may be more reliable to follow than the necessarily device- and application-specific rendering.
>> The example shows how the Hebrew-language string
> 
> ?
> 
> Grüße, Carsten
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