[auth48] *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review

Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> Mon, 29 August 2022 17:39 UTC

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Subject: [auth48] *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
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Dear Gary, Lizzi, Martijn, and *AD (Murray),

* Murray, please let us know if you approve (1) the removal of Normative Ref. RFC 1945 and (2) a new sentence containing "MUST NOT" in Section 2.2.4.

Gary, thank you very much for the updated XML files!

Martijn, your contact information in the Authors' Addresses section now appears as follows.  Please confirm that this is as desired:

   Martijn Koster (editor)
   Suton Lane
   Wymondham, Norfolk
   NR18 9JG
   United Kingdom
   Email: m.koster@greenhills.co.uk

The latest files are posted here:

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.xml
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-rfcdiff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-auth48diff.html

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff1.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff2.html

Gary, Lizzi, and Martijn, we have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status page:

   https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309

Thanks again!

RFC Editor/lb


> From: Gary Illyes <garyillyes=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:41:50 AM PDT
> To: Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>, Henner Zeller <henner@google.com>
> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, lizzi@google.com, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> 
> Thank you. Done on github (https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18) and attached to this email again.
> 
> Henner, we need the last LGTM from you. 


> From: Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:01:13 AM PDT
> To: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, henner@google.com, lizzi@google.com, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> 
> Hi Gary,
> 
> Please remove my organisation Stalworthy Computing, Ltd  from
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18
> 
> The rest LGTM
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> — Martijn


> From: Lizzi Sassman <lizzi=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> Date: August 26, 2022 at 12:58:13 PM PDT
> To: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>, Henner Zeller <henner@google.com>, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, superuser@gmail.com, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> 
> The draft LGTM.
> 
> Thanks,
> Lizzi

> On Aug 26, 2022, at 7:08 AM, Gary Illyes <garyillyes=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Thank you for your edits and review. Lizzi and I addressed the comments received and attached the updated XML to this email (also at https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml)
> 
> The draft attached looks good to me and from my perspective approved for publication. 
> 
> Martijn, Lizzi, Henner, please review this draft and provide feedback (probably on GitHub) and/or approval for publication.
> 
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC9309 (draft-koster-rep-12)
> 
> Title            : Robots Exclusion Protocol
> Author(s)        : M. Koster, Ed., G. Illyes, Ed., H. Zeller, Ed., L. Sassman, Ed.
> WG Chair(s)      : 
> Area Director(s) : 
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> <rfc9309.xml>