Re: [auth48] *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review

Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> Mon, 29 August 2022 18:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
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Dear Gary,

No worries, and thank you for the clarification.

RFC Editor/lb

> On Aug 29, 2022, at 10:49 AM, Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com> wrote:
> 
> Apologies, should've noted the new sentence:
> 
> "For example, a "Sitemaps" record MUST NOT terminate a group."
> 
> The normative reference to RFC 1945 was an erroneous reference; we implied that that RFC defines how many hops to follow in a redirect chain, which is simply not the case. 
> 
> On Mon, 29 Aug 2022 at 19:39, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com> wrote:
> Dear Gary, Lizzi, Martijn, and *AD (Murray),
> 
> * Murray, please let us know if you approve (1) the removal of Normative Ref. RFC 1945 and (2) a new sentence containing "MUST NOT" in Section 2.2.4.
> 
> Gary, thank you very much for the updated XML files!
> 
> Martijn, your contact information in the Authors' Addresses section now appears as follows.  Please confirm that this is as desired:
> 
>    Martijn Koster (editor)
>    Suton Lane
>    Wymondham, Norfolk
>    NR18 9JG
>    United Kingdom
>    Email: m.koster@greenhills.co.uk
> 
> The latest files are posted here:
> 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.txt
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.pdf
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.xml
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-diff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-rfcdiff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-auth48diff.html
> 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff1.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff2.html
> 
> Gary, Lizzi, and Martijn, we have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status page:
> 
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309
> 
> Thanks again!
> 
> RFC Editor/lb
> 
> 
> > From: Gary Illyes <garyillyes=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> > Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:41:50 AM PDT
> > To: Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>, Henner Zeller <henner@google.com>
> > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, lizzi@google.com, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > 
> > Thank you. Done on github (https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18) and attached to this email again.
> > 
> > Henner, we need the last LGTM from you. 
> 
> 
> > From: Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> > Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:01:13 AM PDT
> > To: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, henner@google.com, lizzi@google.com, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > 
> > Hi Gary,
> > 
> > Please remove my organisation Stalworthy Computing, Ltd  from
> > https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18
> > 
> > The rest LGTM
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > 
> > — Martijn
> 
> 
> > From: Lizzi Sassman <lizzi=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> > Date: August 26, 2022 at 12:58:13 PM PDT
> > To: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>, Henner Zeller <henner@google.com>, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, superuser@gmail.com, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > 
> > The draft LGTM.
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > Lizzi
> 
> > On Aug 26, 2022, at 7:08 AM, Gary Illyes <garyillyes=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> > 
> > Thank you for your edits and review. Lizzi and I addressed the comments received and attached the updated XML to this email (also at https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml)
> > 
> > The draft attached looks good to me and from my perspective approved for publication. 
> > 
> > Martijn, Lizzi, Henner, please review this draft and provide feedback (probably on GitHub) and/or approval for publication.
> > 
> > 
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> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC9309 (draft-koster-rep-12)
> > 
> > Title            : Robots Exclusion Protocol
> > Author(s)        : M. Koster, Ed., G. Illyes, Ed., H. Zeller, Ed., L. Sassman, Ed.
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> > <rfc9309.xml>
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> -- 
> Thanks,
> Gary