Re: [auth48] *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review

Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com> Mon, 29 August 2022 17:50 UTC

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From: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
Date: Mon, 29 Aug 2022 19:49:42 +0200
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To: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
Cc: Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, RFC System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org, henner@google.com, lizzi@google.com, m.koster@greenhills.co.uk
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Subject: Re: [auth48] *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
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Apologies, should've noted the new sentence:

"For example, a "Sitemaps" record MUST NOT terminate a group."

The normative reference to RFC 1945 was an erroneous reference; we implied
that that RFC defines how many hops to follow in a redirect chain, which is
simply not the case.

On Mon, 29 Aug 2022 at 19:39, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
wrote:

> Dear Gary, Lizzi, Martijn, and *AD (Murray),
>
> * Murray, please let us know if you approve (1) the removal of Normative
> Ref. RFC 1945 and (2) a new sentence containing "MUST NOT" in Section 2.2.4.
>
> Gary, thank you very much for the updated XML files!
>
> Martijn, your contact information in the Authors' Addresses section now
> appears as follows.  Please confirm that this is as desired:
>
>    Martijn Koster (editor)
>    Suton Lane
>    Wymondham, Norfolk
>    NR18 9JG
>    United Kingdom
>    Email: m.koster@greenhills.co.uk
>
> The latest files are posted here:
>
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.txt
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.pdf
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.xml
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-diff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-rfcdiff.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-auth48diff.html
>
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff1.html
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff2.html
>
> Gary, Lizzi, and Martijn, we have noted your approvals on the AUTH48
> status page:
>
>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309
>
> Thanks again!
>
> RFC Editor/lb
>
>
> > From: Gary Illyes <garyillyes=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> > Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:41:50 AM PDT
> > To: Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>, Henner Zeller <
> henner@google.com>
> > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, lizzi@google.com, Ted Hardie <
> ted.ietf@gmail.com>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>,
> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >
> > Thank you. Done on github (
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18)
> and attached to this email again.
> >
> > Henner, we need the last LGTM from you.
>
>
> > From: Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> > Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:01:13 AM PDT
> > To: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, henner@google.com, lizzi@google.com, Ted
> Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>,
> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >
> > Hi Gary,
> >
> > Please remove my organisation Stalworthy Computing, Ltd  from
> >
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18
> >
> > The rest LGTM
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > — Martijn
>
>
> > From: Lizzi Sassman <lizzi=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
> > Date: August 26, 2022 at 12:58:13 PM PDT
> > To: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>,
> Henner Zeller <henner@google.com>, Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>,
> superuser@gmail.com, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >
> > The draft LGTM.
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Lizzi
>
> > On Aug 26, 2022, at 7:08 AM, Gary Illyes <garyillyes=
> 40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> >
> > Thank you for your edits and review. Lizzi and I addressed the comments
> received and attached the updated XML to this email (also at
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml
> )
> >
> > The draft attached looks good to me and from my perspective approved for
> publication.
> >
> > Martijn, Lizzi, Henner, please review this draft and provide feedback
> (probably on GitHub) and/or approval for publication.
> >
> >
> > On Fri, Aug 26, 2022 at 8:24 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
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> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC9309 (draft-koster-rep-12)
> >
> > Title            : Robots Exclusion Protocol
> > Author(s)        : M. Koster, Ed., G. Illyes, Ed., H. Zeller, Ed., L.
> Sassman, Ed.
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> > <rfc9309.xml>
>
> --
Thanks,
Gary