Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review

Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com> Tue, 06 September 2022 20:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
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The (editor) comes from my XML; I was looking at XML2RFC examples when I
was converting the text file to XML, and I picked  the "ed" up from a
published RFC, alas, I don't remember which one.

We can certainly remove it from all names, it doesn't have to be there.

On Tue, 6 Sep 2022 at 22:44, Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>
wrote:

> Hi Lynne,
>
> I’m not sure why it says “(editor)”; is that some convention?
>
> I notice that the street address is incomplete; it should be:
>
>     Stalworthy Manor Farm
>     Suton Lane
>
> Or if space does not permit two lines:
>
>     Stalworthy Manor Farm, Suton Lane
>
> The rest is correct.
>
> Thanks,
>
> — Martijn
>
> > On 6 Sep 2022, at 21:27, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > Hi, Martijn.
> >
> > We are preparing this document for publication and could not find a
> reply regarding the following:
> >
> >> Martijn, your contact information in the Authors' Addresses section now
> appears as follows.  Please confirm that this is as desired:
> >>
> >>  Martijn Koster (editor)
> >>  Suton Lane
> >>  Wymondham, Norfolk
> >>  NR18 9JG
> >>  United Kingdom
> >>  Email: m.koster@greenhills.co.uk
> >
> > Please let us know whether this listing is OK "as is" or should be
> updated.
> >
> > Thank you!
> >
> > RFC Editor/lb
> >
> >
> >> On Sep 2, 2022, at 9:30 AM, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
> wrote:
> >>
> >> Hi, Gary.
> >>
> >> Thank you, and glad to hear that the figures look good!
> >>
> >> Also, thank you as always for the updated XML file!  Removing the
> quotes in Figure 5 looks good to us as well.
> >>
> >> Thanks also for the clarification re. "more" and "valid".
> >>
> >> The latest files are posted here:
> >>
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.txt
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.pdf
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.html
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.xml
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-diff.html
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-rfcdiff.html
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-auth48diff.html
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-lastdiff.html
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-lastrfcdiff.html
> >>
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff1.html
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff2.html
> >>
> >> We have confirmed your approval on the AUTH48 status page and will move
> this document forward for publication shortly:
> >>
> >>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309
> >>
> >> Again, many thanks for your help!
> >>
> >> RFC Editor/lb
> >>
> >>
> >>>> On Sep 2, 2022, at 4:11 AM, Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Hi Lynne,
> >>>
> >>> The conversion of the tables to artwork is ingenious. The tables now
> look good.
> >>> I made one modification in figure 5 in section 2.2.3. Specifically,
> removed the double quotes from the 1st and 3rd columns as they seemed
> superfluous. Feel free to change it back if the double quotes are an RFC
> style requirement. The modified XML is attached and also available at
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml
> >>>
> >>> The "a more valid" was changed to "valid"; the "more" qualifier
> could've suggested that robots.txt is in fact a valid security measure,
> just not as valid as some other, which is just wrong.
> >>>
> >>> As for the merged group in figure 2/table 2, I staged the draft using
> author-tools.ietf.org, both as HTML and TXT, and it looks good to me.
> >>>
> >>> Overall, pending those double quotes in figure 5, this looks good to
> me and is ready for shipping.
> >>>
> >>> Thanks for working with us on this Lynne!
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>> On Thu, Sep 1, 2022 at 11:27 PM Lynne Bartholomew <
> lbartholomew@amsl.com> wrote:
> >>> Resending, with inline email headers pared down, as we received a
> bounce due to the many full headers that I'd included earlier.  (I'd
> included the full headers for tracking purposes.)  Hoping that this reaches
> you all.
> >>>
> >>>> On Sep 1, 2022, at 1:06 PM, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> Hi, Gary**, Henner, and Murray.  Thank you for the emails.  Gary,
> thanks for the updated XML files as well!
> >>>>
> >>>> ** Gary, although we now have all approvals for publication, due to
> the number of updates made since 31 August, please let us know if further
> changes are needed; we have a couple questions below.
> >>>>
> >>>> After everything is resolved and we get confirmation re. same, we
> will be able to move this document forward for publication.
> >>>>
> >>>> Gary, regarding this item:
> >>>>
> >>>>> Line 495 changed: removed "a more valid", which may have suggested
> that robots.txt is, in fact, a valid security measure—which most certainly
> isn't.
> >>>>
> >>>> We still see the word "valid" in this sentence.  Please confirm that
> this is as desired.
> >>>>
> >>>> Regarding the table-format issues:  We have converted the tables to
> figures; it was the only way to fix the text output while conforming to
> current formatting guidelines.  Please note that due to font and spacing
> differences between the different outputs, we could not always get the same
> layout in the .txt output as what was previously seen in the tables in the
> .html output.  (For example, Figure 1 maxes out the margins in the .txt
> output.)
> >>>>
> >>>> Please review all of the figures carefully.  For example, in the
> previous iteration, the position of "disallow: /baz" in what was Table 2
> (now Figure 2) was different in the .txt output than in the .html output
> (where "disallow: /baz" was on its own line); which is correct?* It isn't
> clear from the original file what is correct.  Please let us know if
> further updates are needed.
> >>>>
> >>>> * We kept "disallow: /baz" on its own line for now, as it appears to
> be part of the single "merged" group.
> >>>>
> >>>> The latest files are posted here (please refresh your browser to see
> the latest):
> >>>>
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.txt
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.pdf
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.xml
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-diff.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-auth48diff.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-lastdiff.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-lastrfcdiff.html
> >>>>
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff2.html
> >>>>
> >>>> Henner and Murray, we have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 status
> page:
> >>>>
> >>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309
> >>>>
> >>>> As noted above, we will move this document forward for publication
> after we receive confirmation that everything is correct.
> >>>>
> >>>> Thanks again!
> >>>>
> >>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>>> From: Gary Illyes
> >>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12>
> for your review
> >>>>> Date: August 31, 2022 at 12:54:32 PM PDT
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Hi Lynne,
> >>>>>
> >>>>> We just noticed an oddity and we're wondering if we're doing
> something wrong or if it's a bug in the XML to text converter.
> Specifically, some of our tables get line breaks in the text representation
> when they really shouldn't. For example, table 1 renders as such on
> author-tools.ietf.org:
> >>>>> | User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0               | user-agent:     |
> >>>>> | (compatible; ExampleBot/0.1;      | ExampleBot      |
> >>>>>
> >>>>> In the XML version (and HTML) "ExampleBot" in the second column is
> on the same line as "user-agent:". However, as illustrated above, in the
> converted text version it's on a new line. This renders the reference plain
> wrong.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Do you know if we can fix that somehow? Perhaps adding &nbps; to
> prevent the converter from breaking the line?
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Attached a screenshot for reference.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> <image.png>
> >>>>
> >>>>> From: Gary Illyes
> >>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12>
> for your review
> >>>>> Date: August 31, 2022 at 11:43:31 AM PDT
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> I put an xref to RFC 9110 at the first appearance of HTTP in the
> prose:
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L180
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Updated XML also attached.
> >>>>
> >>>>> From: Gary Illyes
> >>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12>
> for your review
> >>>>> Date: August 31, 2022 at 11:13:41 AM PDT
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Sure, makes sense; we can do that. In that case I'll use the latest
> HTTP RFC instead of 1945
> >>>>
> >>>>> From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
> >>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12>
> for your review
> >>>>> Date: August 31, 2022 at 11:11:30 AM PDT
> >>>>> To: Gary Illyes
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Fair enough.  I wonder though if we should have some kind of link to
> what HTTP is anyway, perhaps attached to its first appearance in the prose
> after the introduction.  It really is a normative dependency here, even if
> it is ubiquitous.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> -MSK
> >>>>
> >>>>> From: Gary Illyes
> >>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12>
> for your review
> >>>>> Date: August 31, 2022 at 11:02:18 AM PDT
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> We could, if there was an RFC that says that clients must follow *at
> least* 5 hops. Unfortunately all I can find is the opposite, follow *up to*
> 5 hops (because more is likely a loop).
> >>>>
> >>>>> From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
> >>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12>
> for your review
> >>>>> Date: August 31, 2022 at 10:58:54 AM PDT
> >>>>> To: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> The new "MUST NOT" is fine.  Rather than deleting it, should we
> replace the reference to RFC 1945 with a reference to one of the newer HTTP
> RFCs?
> >>>>>
> >>>>> -MSK, ART AD
> >>>>
> >>>>> From: Gary Illyes
> >>>>> Subject: Re: *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12>
> for your review
> >>>>> Date: August 31, 2022 at 10:52:12 AM PDT
> >>>>> To: Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>, "Murray S.
> Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> With Henner's approval, I believe we're only missing the AD approval
> for the minute changes we made and Lynne highlighted at the beginning of
> this fork of the thread.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Mon, 29 Aug 2022 at 20:36, Lynne Bartholomew <
> lbartholomew@amsl.com> wrote:
> >>>>> Dear Gary,
> >>>>>
> >>>>> No worries, and thank you for the clarification.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>
> >>>>>> On Aug 29, 2022, at 10:49 AM, Gary Illyes wrote:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Apologies, should've noted the new sentence:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> "For example, a "Sitemaps" record MUST NOT terminate a group."
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The normative reference to RFC 1945 was an erroneous reference; we
> implied that that RFC defines how many hops to follow in a redirect chain,
> which is simply not the case.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> On Mon, 29 Aug 2022 at 19:39, Lynne Bartholomew <
> lbartholomew@amsl.com> wrote:
> >>>>>> Dear Gary, Lizzi, Martijn, and *AD (Murray),
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> * Murray, please let us know if you approve (1) the removal of
> Normative Ref. RFC 1945 and (2) a new sentence containing "MUST NOT" in
> Section 2.2.4.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Gary, thank you very much for the updated XML files!
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Martijn, your contact information in the Authors' Addresses section
> now appears as follows.  Please confirm that this is as desired:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>  Martijn Koster (editor)
> >>>>>>  Suton Lane
> >>>>>>  Wymondham, Norfolk
> >>>>>>  NR18 9JG
> >>>>>>  United Kingdom
> >>>>>>  Email: m.koster@greenhills.co.uk
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The latest files are posted here:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.txt
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.pdf
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.html
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.xml
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-diff.html
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-rfcdiff.html
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-auth48diff.html
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff2.html
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Gary, Lizzi, and Martijn, we have noted your approvals on the
> AUTH48 status page:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Thanks again!
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> RFC Editor/lb
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>> From: Gary Illyes
> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your
> review
> >>>>>>> Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:41:50 AM PDT
> >>>>>
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Thank you. Done on github (
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18)
> and attached to this email again.
> >>>>>>>
> >>>>>>> Henner, we need the last LGTM from you.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> <snipped>
> >>>>
> >>>>> On Aug 31, 2022, at 10:08 AM, Gary Illyes wrote:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> New version up addressing Henner's last comment (also attached to
> this email):
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L495
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Line 495 changed: removed "a more valid", which may have suggested
> that robots.txt is, in fact, a valid security measure—which most certainly
> isn't.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> I think that was the last of the approvals from our side. Passing
> baton to AD
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Wed, Aug 31, 2022 at 6:59 PM Henner Zeller <hzeller@google.com>
> wrote:
> >>>>> Looks good to me. Approved!
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Mon, 29 Aug 2022 at 02:42, Gary Illyes wrote:
> >>>>> Thank you. Done on github (
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18)
> and attached to this email again.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Henner, we need the last LGTM from you.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> On Mon, Aug 29, 2022 at 11:01 AM Martijn Koster <
> m.koster@greenhills.co.uk> wrote:
> >>>>> Hi Gary,
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Please remove my organisation Stalworthy Computing, Ltd  from
> >>>>>
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18
> >>>>>
> >>>>> The rest LGTM
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Thanks,
> >>>>>
> >>>>> — Martijn
> >>>>>
> >>>>>> On 26 Aug 2022, at 15:08, Gary Illyes wrote:
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Thank you for your edits and review. Lizzi and I addressed the
> comments received and attached the updated XML to this email (also at
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml
> )
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The draft attached looks good to me and from my perspective
> approved for publication.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Martijn, Lizzi, Henner, please review this draft and provide
> feedback (probably on GitHub) and/or approval for publication.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> On Fri, Aug 26, 2022 at 8:24 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> >>>>>> *****IMPORTANT*****
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Updated 2022/08/25
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> RFC Author(s):
> >>>>>> --------------
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Instructions for Completing AUTH48
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> >>>>>> Files
> >>>>>> -----
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The files are available here:
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.xml
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.html
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.pdf
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.txt
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Diff file of the text:
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> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-rfcdiff.html (side by
> side)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Diff of the XML:
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff1.html
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The following files are provided to facilitate creation of your own
> >>>>>> diff files of the XML.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Initial XMLv3 created using XMLv2 as input:
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.original.v2v3.xml
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> XMLv3 file that is a best effort to capture v3-related format
> updates
> >>>>>> only:
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.form.xml
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Tracking progress
> >>>>>> -----------------
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> The details of the AUTH48 status of your document are here:
> >>>>>>  https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Please let us know if you have any questions.
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> RFC Editor
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> --------------------------------------
> >>>>>> RFC9309 (draft-koster-rep-12)
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> Title            : Robots Exclusion Protocol
> >>>>>> Author(s)        : M. Koster, Ed., G. Illyes, Ed., H. Zeller, Ed.,
> L. Sassman, Ed.
> >>>>>> WG Chair(s)      :
> >>>>>> Area Director(s) :
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>>
> >>>>>> <rfc9309.xml>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> <rfc9309.xml>
> >>>>
> >>>
> >>> <rfc9309.xml>
> >>
> >
>
-- 
Thanks,
Gary