Re: [auth48] *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review

Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com> Wed, 31 August 2022 17:52 UTC

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From: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2022 19:52:12 +0200
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Subject: Re: [auth48] *[AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your review
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With Henner's approval, I believe we're only missing the AD approval for
the minute changes we made and Lynne highlighted at the beginning of this
fork of the thread.

https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309


On Mon, 29 Aug 2022 at 20:36, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
wrote:

> Dear Gary,
>
> No worries, and thank you for the clarification.
>
> RFC Editor/lb
>
> > On Aug 29, 2022, at 10:49 AM, Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com> wrote:
> >
> > Apologies, should've noted the new sentence:
> >
> > "For example, a "Sitemaps" record MUST NOT terminate a group."
> >
> > The normative reference to RFC 1945 was an erroneous reference; we
> implied that that RFC defines how many hops to follow in a redirect chain,
> which is simply not the case.
> >
> > On Mon, 29 Aug 2022 at 19:39, Lynne Bartholomew <lbartholomew@amsl.com>
> wrote:
> > Dear Gary, Lizzi, Martijn, and *AD (Murray),
> >
> > * Murray, please let us know if you approve (1) the removal of Normative
> Ref. RFC 1945 and (2) a new sentence containing "MUST NOT" in Section 2.2.4.
> >
> > Gary, thank you very much for the updated XML files!
> >
> > Martijn, your contact information in the Authors' Addresses section now
> appears as follows.  Please confirm that this is as desired:
> >
> >    Martijn Koster (editor)
> >    Suton Lane
> >    Wymondham, Norfolk
> >    NR18 9JG
> >    United Kingdom
> >    Email: m.koster@greenhills.co.uk
> >
> > The latest files are posted here:
> >
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.txt
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.pdf
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309.xml
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-diff.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-rfcdiff.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-auth48diff.html
> >
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff1.html
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9309-xmldiff2.html
> >
> > Gary, Lizzi, and Martijn, we have noted your approvals on the AUTH48
> status page:
> >
> >    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9309
> >
> > Thanks again!
> >
> > RFC Editor/lb
> >
> >
> > > From: Gary Illyes <garyillyes=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your
> review
> > > Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:41:50 AM PDT
> > > To: Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>, Henner Zeller <
> henner@google.com>
> > > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, lizzi@google.com, Ted Hardie <
> ted.ietf@gmail.com>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>,
> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > >
> > > Thank you. Done on github (
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18)
> and attached to this email again.
> > >
> > > Henner, we need the last LGTM from you.
> >
> >
> > > From: Martijn Koster <m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>
> > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your
> review
> > > Date: August 29, 2022 at 2:01:13 AM PDT
> > > To: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> > > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, henner@google.com, lizzi@google.com,
> Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, "Murray S. Kucherawy" <
> superuser@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > >
> > > Hi Gary,
> > >
> > > Please remove my organisation Stalworthy Computing, Ltd  from
> > >
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml#L18
> > >
> > > The rest LGTM
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > >
> > > — Martijn
> >
> >
> > > From: Lizzi Sassman <lizzi=40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
> > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9309 <draft-koster-rep-12> for your
> review
> > > Date: August 26, 2022 at 12:58:13 PM PDT
> > > To: Gary Illyes <garyillyes@google.com>
> > > Cc: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org, Martijn Koster <
> m.koster@greenhills.co.uk>, Henner Zeller <henner@google.com>, Ted Hardie
> <ted.ietf@gmail.com>, superuser@gmail.com, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > >
> > > The draft LGTM.
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > Lizzi
> >
> > > On Aug 26, 2022, at 7:08 AM, Gary Illyes <garyillyes=
> 40google.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> > >
> > > Thank you for your edits and review. Lizzi and I addressed the
> comments received and attached the updated XML to this email (also at
> https://github.com/google/robotstxt/blob/master/protocol-draft/rfc9309.xml
> )
> > >
> > > The draft attached looks good to me and from my perspective approved
> for publication.
> > >
> > > Martijn, Lizzi, Henner, please review this draft and provide feedback
> (probably on GitHub) and/or approval for publication.
> > >
> > >
> > > On Fri, Aug 26, 2022 at 8:24 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
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> > > RFC Editor
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> > > --------------------------------------
> > > RFC9309 (draft-koster-rep-12)
> > >
> > > Title            : Robots Exclusion Protocol
> > > Author(s)        : M. Koster, Ed., G. Illyes, Ed., H. Zeller, Ed., L.
> Sassman, Ed.
> > > WG Chair(s)      :
> > > Area Director(s) :
> > >
> > >
> > > <rfc9309.xml>
> >
> > --
> > Thanks,
> > Gary
>
> --
Thanks,
Gary