Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9300 <draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-38> for your review

Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> Fri, 09 September 2022 00:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9300 <draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-38> for your review
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> On Sep 8, 2022, at 4:32 PM, Alanna Paloma <apaloma@amsl.com> wrote:
> 
> Note that one query remains unanswered. Please clarify which form of the following terms you prefer to use.
> 
>> b) The following terms appear to be used inconsistently in this
>> document.  Please let us know which form is preferred.
>> 
>> a Nonce / a nonce (e.g., "a nonce", "a Nonce value")
>> 
>> ICMP Unreachable / ICMPv4 ICMP Unreachable / ICMPv4 Unreachable

Sorry for not being specific. I believe the reference should be “ICMPv4 Unreachable”. 

Dino