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Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9300 <draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-38> for your review

Dino Farinacci <farinacci@gmail.com> Fri, 09 September 2022 19:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [auth48] [C381] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9300 <draft-ietf-lisp-rfc6830bis-38> for your review
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> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9300-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes)

I just reviewed this diff. Here are some comments:

> 

The feature is "echo-nonce" and when one sends a request packet it should state "… which echo-nonce request packets are sent …". And the state is called "echo-nonce state". So replace the last two occurences.

> 

Chnage to "… MUST NOT use the LSB field, when …".

Other than the 2 comments, I approve the rest of your changes. Thanks so much for the huge effort!

Dino

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