Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review
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Subject: Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review
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Rakesh, We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9534 And we will await word from Jun regarding other AUTH48 changes and/or approval. Best regards, RFC Editor/jm On 1/26/24 11:59 AM, Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) wrote: > Thanks Jean and co-authors for your review and updates. > > Looks good to me, I approve the document. > > Thanks, > > Rakesh > > *From: *Jean Mahoney <jmahoney@amsl.com> > *Date: *Friday, January 26, 2024 at 12:53 PM > *To: *li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com <li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com>, Tianran Zhou > <zhoutianran@huawei.com>, Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>, > rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> > *Cc: *guo.jun2@zte.com.cn <guo.jun2@zte.com.cn>, Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) > <rgandhi@cisco.com>, ippm-ads@ietf.org <ippm-ads@ietf.org>, IPPM Chairs > <ippm-chairs@ietf.org>, marcus.ihlar <marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com>, Martin > Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>, Zhukeyi (Kaiyin, Enterprise NE) > <zhukeyi@huawei.com> > *Subject: *Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> > for your review > > Greg, Tianran, > > We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9534 > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9534> > > > Tianran, Rakesh, > > We have updated the document with your feedback: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-lastrfcdiff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-lastrfcdiff.html> > > > We will await further word from Rakesh and Jun regarding other AUTH48 > changes and/or approval. > > The files have been posted here: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.txt > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.txt> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.pdf > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.pdf> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.html> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.xml > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.xml> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-diff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-diff.html> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-rfcdiff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-rfcdiff.html> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-auth48diff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-auth48diff.html> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-lastdiff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-lastdiff.html> > > > Best Regards, > RFC Editor/jm > > > > On 1/24/24 10:58 PM, li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com wrote: >> Dear Jean and coauthors, >> >> I approve the changes and Tianran's suggestion. Thanks Jean. >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> Best Regards, >> Zhenqiang Li >> China Mobile >> li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com >> >> *From:* Tianran Zhou <mailto:zhoutianran@huawei.com <mailto:zhoutianran@huawei.com>> >> *Date:* 2024-01-25 09:06 >> *To:* Jean Mahoney <mailto:jmahoney@amsl.com <mailto:jmahoney@amsl.com>>; >> li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com <mailto:li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com <mailto:li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com>>; Greg >> Mirsky <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>>; > rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org >> <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>> >> *CC:* guo.jun2@zte.com.cn <mailto:guo.jun2@zte.com.cn <mailto:guo.jun2@zte.com.cn>>; Rakesh >> Gandhi (rgandhi) <mailto:rgandhi@cisco.com <mailto:rgandhi@cisco.com>>; ippm-ads@ietf.org >> <mailto:ippm-ads@ietf.org <mailto:ippm-ads@ietf.org>>; IPPM Chairs >> <mailto:ippm-chairs@ietf.org <mailto:ippm-chairs@ietf.org>>; marcus.ihlar >> <mailto:marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com <mailto:marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com>>; > Martin Duke >> <mailto:martin.h.duke@gmail.com <mailto:martin.h.duke@gmail.com>>; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> <mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > <mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>>; Zhukeyi(Kaiyin,Datacom >> Standard&Patent) <mailto:zhukeyi@huawei.com <mailto:zhukeyi@huawei.com>> >> *Subject:* RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 >> <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review >> Hi Jean, >> Thanks for your work. I approve the current version of the document. >> One nit I want to sync with RFC-to-be 9533. >> OLD TEXT: >> All micro sessions of a LAG share the same Sender IP Address and >> Receiver IP Address of the LAG. >> NEW TEXT: >> All micro sessions of a LAG share the same Sender IP Address and >> Receiver IP Address. >> Best, >> Tianran >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Jean Mahoney [mailto:jmahoney@amsl.com <mailto:jmahoney@amsl.com>] >> Sent: Wednesday, January 24, 2024 11:20 PM >> To: li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com; Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>; >> Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org >> Cc: guo.jun2@zte.com.cn; Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) >> <rgandhi@cisco.com>; ippm-ads@ietf.org; IPPM Chairs >> <ippm-chairs@ietf.org>; marcus.ihlar <marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com>; >> Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; >> Zhukeyi(Kaiyin,Datacom Standard&Patent) <zhukeyi@huawei.com> >> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 >> <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review >> Zhenqiang, Greg, Tianran, >> Thank you for your quick responses! We have updated the document >> based on your feedback: >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/authors/rfc9534-lastrfcdiff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/authors/rfc9534-lastrfcdiff.html> >> Zhenqiang, we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9534 > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9534> >> The files have been posted here: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.txt > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.txt> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.pdf > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.pdf> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.html> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.xml > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.xml> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-diff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-diff.html> (all changes) >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-rfcdiff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-rfcdiff.html> (all >> changes side by side) >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-auth48diff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-auth48diff.html> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-alt-diff.html > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-alt-diff.html> >> We will await further word from you and your coauthors regarding other >> AUTH48 changes and/or approval. >> Best regards, >> RFC Editor/jm >> On 1/23/24 10:13 PM, li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com wrote: >> > Hello Editor and coauthors, >> > >> > I have no objection on Greg's and Tianran's suggestion. >> > >> > >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> > -- >> > Best Regards, >> > Zhenqiang Li >> > China Mobile >> > li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com >> > >> > *From:* Tianran Zhou <mailto:zhoutianran@huawei.com <mailto:zhoutianran@huawei.com>> >> > *Date:* 2024-01-24 11:08 >> > *To:* Greg Mirsky <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>>; >> > rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>> >> > *CC:* li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com <mailto:li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com <mailto:li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com>>; >> > guo.jun2@zte.com.cn <mailto:guo.jun2@zte.com.cn <mailto:guo.jun2@zte.com.cn>>; >> rgandhi@cisco.com >> > <mailto:rgandhi@cisco.com <mailto:rgandhi@cisco.com>>; ippm-ads@ietf.org >> > <mailto:ippm-ads@ietf.org <mailto:ippm-ads@ietf.org>>; ippm-chairs@ietf.org >> > <mailto:ippm-chairs@ietf.org <mailto:ippm-chairs@ietf.org>>; > marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com >> > <mailto:marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com <mailto:marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com>>; > martin.h.duke@gmail.com >> > <mailto:martin.h.duke@gmail.com <mailto:martin.h.duke@gmail.com>>; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> > <mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > <mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>>; Zhukeyi(Kaiyin,Datacom >> > Standard&Patent) <mailto:zhukeyi@huawei.com <mailto:zhukeyi@huawei.com>> >> > *Subject:* RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 >> > <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review >> > >> > Hi Editor and Greg, >> > >> > I prefer Greg’s change on this. >> > >> > GIM>> Thank you for the question and proposed update. I agree >> that >> > the first occurence of "tuple" must be singular. The second, as I >> > think of how it works, is about modifying some elements of the >> > 5-tuple. I would propose the following update: >> > >> > OLD TEXT: >> > >> > One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the >> performance of a >> > member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an >> average of >> > some or all member links of the LAG by varying the five >> tuples. >> > >> > NEW TEXT: >> > >> > A STAMP test session over the LAG can be used to measure the >> > performance of a >> > >> > member link using specially-constructed 5-tuple. The >> session can >> > be used to measure an average of >> > >> > some or all member links of the LAG by varying one or more >> > elements of that 5-tuple. >> > >> > Cheers, >> > >> > Tianran >> > >> > *From:*Greg Mirsky [mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>] >> > *Sent:* Wednesday, January 24, 2024 10:53 AM >> > *To:* rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org >> > *Cc:* li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com; Tianran Zhou >> > <zhoutianran@huawei.com>; guo.jun2@zte.com.cn; rgandhi@cisco.com; >> > ippm-ads@ietf.org; ippm-chairs@ietf.org; >> marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com; >> > martin.h.duke@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> > *Subject:* Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 >> > <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review >> > >> > Dear RFC Editor, >> > >> > thank you for your thoughtful consideration of the document and >> > helpful suggestions to improve it. Please find my responses >> to your >> > questions below tagged by GIM>>. Please let me know if there >> are any >> > further questions or actions I should take. >> > >> > Regards, >> > >> > Greg >> > >> > On Tue, Jan 23, 2024 at 10:44 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org >> > <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>>> wrote: >> > >> > Authors, >> > >> > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please >> resolve (as >> > necessary) the following questions, which are also in the >> XML file. >> > >> > 1) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the title of the document by >> > expanding LAG. Please let us know if any changes are >> necessary. >> > >> > Original: >> > Simple Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol Extensions for >> > Performance >> > Measurement on LAG >> > >> > Current: >> > Simple Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol Extensions for >> > Performance >> > Measurement on a Link Aggregation Group >> > >> > GIM>> I agree with the proposed text. >> > >> > >> > --> >> > >> > >> > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that >> > appear in >> > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search <https://www.rfc-editor.org/search> >> > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/search <https://www.rfc-editor.org/search>>. --> >> > >> > >> > 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 1. We would like to clarify the >> use of >> > "tuple" in the sentence below: >> > >> > Current: >> > >> > One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the >> > performance of a >> > member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an >> > average of >> > some or all member links of the LAG by varying the >> five tuples. >> > >> > Perhaps (updating "five tuple" to "5-tuple", which is more >> > commonly used; making the first use of "tuple" singular; and >> > changing "varying the five tuples" to "specifying their >> 5-tuples"): >> > >> > One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the >> > performance of a >> > member link using its fixed 5-tuple, or it can measure an >> > average of >> > some or all member links of the LAG by specifying their >> > 5-tuples. >> > >> > GIM>> Thank you for the question and proposed update. I agree >> that >> > the first occurence of "tuple" must be singular. The second, as I >> > think of how it works, is about modifying some elements of the >> > 5-tuple. I would propose the following update: >> > >> > OLD TEXT: >> > >> > One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the >> performance of a >> > member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an >> average of >> > some or all member links of the LAG by varying the five >> tuples. >> > >> > NEW TEXT: >> > >> > A STAMP test session over the LAG can be used to measure the >> > performance of a >> > >> > member link using specially-constructed 5-tuple. The >> session can >> > be used to measure an average of >> > >> > some or all member links of the LAG by varying one or more >> > elements of that 5-tuple. >> > >> > --> >> > >> > >> > 4) <!-- [rfced] [IEEE802.1AX] 802.1AX-2008 has been >> superseded >> > by 802.1AX-2014. Would you like to update the reference? >> > >> > Current: >> > [IEEE802.1AX] >> > IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and >> metropolitan area >> > networks - Link Aggregation", IEEE Std >> 802.1AX-2008, >> > DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2008.4668665, November >> 2008, >> > <https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/4668665 >> > <https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/4668665 > <https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/4668665>>>. >> > >> > GIM>> Yes, please update the reference to the latest. >> > >> > --> >> > >> > >> > 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" >> portion >> > of the online Style Guide >> > >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language >> > >> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>>> >> > and let us know if any changes are needed. >> > >> > Note that our script did not flag any words in >> particular, but >> > this should >> > still be reviewed as a best practice. >> > >> > GIM>> I don't find any updates >> > >> > --> >> > >> > >> > 6) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for >> abbreviations >> > upon first use per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style >> Guide"). >> > Please review each >> > expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. >> > >> > GIM>> All expansions are correct. >> > >> > --> >> > >> > >> > Thank you. >> > >> > RFC Editor/jm >> > >> > On 1/23/24 12:41 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org >> > <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>> wrote: >> > >> > *****IMPORTANT***** >> > >> > Updated 2024/01/23 >> > >> > RFC Author(s): >> > -------------- >> > >> > Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >> > >> > Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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Li, T. Zhou, J. Guo, G. Mirsky, R. >> Gandhi >> > WG Chair(s) : Marcus Ihlar, Tommy Pauly >> > Area Director(s) : Martin Duke, Zaheduzzaman Sarker >> > >> >
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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Greg Mirsky
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- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Greg Mirsky
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Tianran Zhou
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi)
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… Jean Mahoney
- Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-i… guo.jun2
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