Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review
Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com> Wed, 24 January 2024 03:08 UTC
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Hi Editor and Greg, I prefer Greg’s change on this. GIM>> Thank you for the question and proposed update. I agree that the first occurence of "tuple" must be singular. The second, as I think of how it works, is about modifying some elements of the 5-tuple. I would propose the following update: OLD TEXT: One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the performance of a member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an average of some or all member links of the LAG by varying the five tuples. NEW TEXT: A STAMP test session over the LAG can be used to measure the performance of a member link using specially-constructed 5-tuple. The session can be used to measure an average of some or all member links of the LAG by varying one or more elements of that 5-tuple. Cheers, Tianran From: Greg Mirsky [mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com] Sent: Wednesday, January 24, 2024 10:53 AM To: rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org Cc: li_zhenqiang@hotmail.com; Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>; guo.jun2@zte.com.cn; rgandhi@cisco.com; ippm-ads@ietf.org; ippm-chairs@ietf.org; marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com; martin.h.duke@gmail.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review Dear RFC Editor, thank you for your thoughtful consideration of the document and helpful suggestions to improve it. Please find my responses to your questions below tagged by GIM>>. Please let me know if there are any further questions or actions I should take. Regards, Greg On Tue, Jan 23, 2024 at 10:44 AM <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>> wrote: Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the title of the document by expanding LAG. Please let us know if any changes are necessary. Original: Simple Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol Extensions for Performance Measurement on LAG Current: Simple Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol Extensions for Performance Measurement on a Link Aggregation Group GIM>> I agree with the proposed text. --> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> 3) <!-- [rfced] Section 1. We would like to clarify the use of "tuple" in the sentence below: Current: One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the performance of a member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an average of some or all member links of the LAG by varying the five tuples. Perhaps (updating "five tuple" to "5-tuple", which is more commonly used; making the first use of "tuple" singular; and changing "varying the five tuples" to "specifying their 5-tuples"): One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the performance of a member link using its fixed 5-tuple, or it can measure an average of some or all member links of the LAG by specifying their 5-tuples. GIM>> Thank you for the question and proposed update. I agree that the first occurence of "tuple" must be singular. The second, as I think of how it works, is about modifying some elements of the 5-tuple. I would propose the following update: OLD TEXT: One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the performance of a member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an average of some or all member links of the LAG by varying the five tuples. NEW TEXT: A STAMP test session over the LAG can be used to measure the performance of a member link using specially-constructed 5-tuple. The session can be used to measure an average of some or all member links of the LAG by varying one or more elements of that 5-tuple. --> 4) <!-- [rfced] [IEEE802.1AX] 802.1AX-2008 has been superseded by 802.1AX-2014. Would you like to update the reference? Current: [IEEE802.1AX] IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks - Link Aggregation", IEEE Std 802.1AX-2008, DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2008.4668665, November 2008, <https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/4668665>. GIM>> Yes, please update the reference to the latest. --> 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the online Style Guide <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> and let us know if any changes are needed. Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should still be reviewed as a best practice. GIM>> I don't find any updates --> 6) <!-- [rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for abbreviations upon first use per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness. GIM>> All expansions are correct. --> Thank you. RFC Editor/jm On 1/23/24 12:41 PM, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: *****IMPORTANT***** Updated 2024/01/23 RFC Author(s): -------------- Instructions for Completing AUTH48 Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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