Re: [auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review

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Dear Jean and coauthors,
I approve the changes and Tianran's suggestion. Thanks.








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From: TianranZhou <[e-mail]>
To: Jean Mahoney <[e-mail]>;[e-mail] <[e-mail]>;Greg Mirsky <[e-mail]>;[e-mail] <[e-mail]>;
Cc: 郭俊10086979;Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <[e-mail]>;[e-mail] <[e-mail]>;IPPM Chairs <[e-mail]>;marcus.ihlar <[e-mail]>;Martin Duke <[e-mail]>;[e-mail] <[e-mail]>;Zhukeyi(Kaiyin,Datacom Standard&Patent) <[e-mail]>;
Date: 2024年01月25日 09:06
Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review

Hi Jean,
 
Thanks for your work. I approve the current version of the document.
One nit I want to sync with RFC-to-be 9533.
 
OLD TEXT:
   All micro sessions of a LAG share the same Sender IP Address and
   Receiver IP Address of the LAG.
 
NEW TEXT:
   All micro sessions of a LAG share the same Sender IP Address and
   Receiver IP Address.
 
Best,
Tianran
-----Original Message-----
From: Jean Mahoney [mailto:[e-mail]]  
Sent: Wednesday, January 24, 2024 11:20 PM
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Cc: [e-mail]; Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; IPPM Chairs <[e-mail]>; marcus.ihlar <[e-mail]>; Martin Duke <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; Zhukeyi(Kaiyin,Datacom Standard&Patent) <[e-mail]> 
Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534 <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review
 
Zhenqiang, Greg, Tianran,
 
Thank you for your quick responses! We have updated the document based on your feedback:
 
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/in-notes/authors/rfc9534-lastrfcdiff.html
 
Zhenqiang, we have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page:
 
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9534
 
The files have been posted here:
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.txt
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.pdf
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.html
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534.xml
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-diff.html (all changes)
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-rfcdiff.html (all changes side by side)
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-auth48diff.html
    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9534-alt-diff.html
 
We will await further word from you and your coauthors regarding other
AUTH48 changes and/or approval.
 
Best regards,
RFC Editor/jm
 
 
On 1/23/24 10:13 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
> Hello Editor and coauthors,
>  
> I have no objection on Greg's and Tianran's suggestion.
>  
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> --
> Best Regards,
> Zhenqiang Li
> China Mobile
> [e-mail]
>  
>     *From:* Tianran Zhou <mailto:[e-mail]> 
>     *Date:* 2024-01-24 11:08
>     *To:* Greg Mirsky <mailto:[e-mail]>;
>     [e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]> 
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>     [e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>; [e-mail]
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>     <mailto:[e-mail]>; Zhukeyi(Kaiyin,Datacom
>     Standard&Patent) <mailto:[e-mail]> 
>     *Subject:* RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534
>     <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review
>  
>     Hi Editor and Greg,
>  
>     I prefer Greg’s change on this.
>  
>     GIM>> Thank you for the question and proposed update. I agree that
>     the first occurence of "tuple" must be singular. The second, as I
>     think of how it works, is about modifying some elements of the
>     5-tuple. I would propose the following update:
>  
>     OLD TEXT:
>  
>         One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the performance of a
>         member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an average of
>         some or all member links of the LAG by varying the five tuples.
>  
>     NEW TEXT:
>  
>         A STAMP test session over the LAG can be used to measure the
>     performance of a
>  
>         member link using specially-constructed 5-tuple. The session can
>     be used to measure an average of
>  
>         some or all member links of the LAG by varying one or more
>     elements  of that 5-tuple.
>  
>     Cheers,
>  
>     Tianran
>  
>     *From:*Greg Mirsky [mailto:[e-mail]]
>     *Sent:* Wednesday, January 24, 2024 10:53 AM
>     *To:* [e-mail]
>     *Cc:* [e-mail]; Tianran Zhou
>     <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; [e-mail];
>     [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail];
>     [e-mail]; [e-mail]
>     *Subject:* Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9534
>     <draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06> for your review
>  
>     Dear RFC Editor,
>  
>     thank you for your thoughtful consideration of the document and
>     helpful suggestions to improve it. Please find my responses to your
>     questions below tagged by GIM>>. Please let me know if there are any
>     further questions or actions I should take.
>  
>     Regards,
>  
>     Greg
>  
>     On Tue, Jan 23, 2024 at 10:44 AM <[e-mail]
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>         Authors,
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>         While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
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>         1) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the title of the document by
>         expanding LAG. Please let us know if any changes are necessary.
>  
>         Original:
>           Simple Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol Extensions for
>         Performance
>                                     Measurement on LAG
>  
>         Current:
>           Simple Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol Extensions for
>         Performance
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>         Current:
>  
>             One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the
>         performance of a
>             member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an
>         average of
>             some or all member links of the LAG by varying the five tuples.
>  
>         Perhaps (updating "five tuple" to "5-tuple", which is more
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>  
>             One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the
>         performance of a
>             member link using its fixed 5-tuple, or it can measure an
>         average of
>             some or all member links of the LAG by specifying their
>         5-tuples.
>  
>     GIM>> Thank you for the question and proposed update. I agree that
>     the first occurence of "tuple" must be singular. The second, as I
>     think of how it works, is about modifying some elements of the
>     5-tuple. I would propose the following update:
>  
>     OLD TEXT:
>  
>         One STAMP test session over the LAG can measure the performance of a
>         member link with fixed five tuples, or it can measure an average of
>         some or all member links of the LAG by varying the five tuples.
>  
>     NEW TEXT:
>  
>         A STAMP test session over the LAG can be used to measure the
>     performance of a
>  
>         member link using specially-constructed 5-tuple. The session can
>     be used to measure an average of
>  
>         some or all member links of the LAG by varying one or more
>     elements  of that 5-tuple.
>  
>         --> 
>  
>  
>         4) <!-- [rfced] [IEEE802.1AX] 802.1AX-2008 has been superseded
>         by 802.1AX-2014. Would you like to update the reference?
>  
>         Current:
>             [IEEE802.1AX]
>                        IEEE, "IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area
>                        networks - Link Aggregation", IEEE Std 802.1AX-2008,
>                        DOI 10.1109/IEEESTD.2008.4668665, November 2008,
>                        <https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/4668665
>         <https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/4668665>>.
>  
>     GIM>> Yes, please update the reference to the latest.
>  
>         --> 
>  
>  
>         5) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion
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>  
>         Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but
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>         still be reviewed as a best practice.
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>     GIM>> I don't find any updates
>  
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>     GIM>> All expansions are correct.
>  
>         --> 
>  
>  
>         Thank you.
>  
>         RFC Editor/jm
>  
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>         RFC9534 (draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-on-lag-06)
>  
>         Title            : Simple Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol
>         Extensions for Performance Measurement on LAG
>         Author(s)        : Z. Li, T. Zhou, J. Guo, G. Mirsky, R. Gandhi
>         WG Chair(s)      : Marcus Ihlar, Tommy Pauly
>         Area Director(s) : Martin Duke, Zaheduzzaman Sarker
>