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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-imss-fc-rtm-mib-03.txt

"Spencer Dawkins" <spencer@mcsr-labs.org> Fri, 21 April 2006 01:30 UTC

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From: Spencer Dawkins <spencer@mcsr-labs.org>
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("Snort!") I was re-reading my own review tonight and saw


> Spencer (more than a NIT): This paragraph is really tortured, until you 
> get to the last sentence, which seems all that's needed anyway (suggest 
> "While this useful feature results in an unusually large number (ten) of 
> objects in the t11FcRouteTable's INDEX clause, all ten are all ten are 
> either integers

s/all ten are all ten are/all ten are/

"Writing error-free text is hard" :-(

Thanks,

Spencer 



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