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Re: [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - title of the section 4.3 on LLs

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com>
CC: "int-dir@ietf.org" <int-dir@ietf.org>, "ietf@ietf.org" <ietf@ietf.org>, "its@ietf.org" <its@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - title of the section 4.3 on LLs
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Subject: Re: [Int-dir] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - title of the section 4.3 on LLs
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The sentence
> > " Among these types of addresses only the IPv6 link-local addresses
> > MAY be formed using an EUI-64 identifier. "
 is the logical equivalent to
"non LL Addresses MAY NOT be formed using an EUI-64 identifier". This should be said in a section that discusses non LL Addresses.

All the best,

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com>
> Sent: lundi 8 avril 2019 17:45
> To: Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com>
> Cc: int-dir@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; its@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-
> 80211ocb.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 -
> title of the section 4.3 on LLs
> 
> 
> Le 04/03/2019 à 12:24, Pascal Thubert a écrit :
> > Reviewer: Pascal Thubert Review result: Not Ready
> [...]
> > " Among these types of addresses only the IPv6 link-local addresses
> > MAY be formed using an EUI-64 identifier. "
> >
> > This text should not be in a LL specific section since it deals with
> > the other addresses. Maybe rename the section to "addressing" or
> > something?
> 
> The titles of these sections come directly from the RFC2464 IPv6-over-
> Ethernet.
> 
> The title of this section is 'Link-Local Addresses' and as such it has the Address
> root in it.
> 
> The text deals indeed with other kinds of addresses, in that it says 'There are
> several types of IPv6 addresses'.  But then it gets specific to LL addresses.  The
> 'MAY' keyword is only applied to LL addresses.
> 
> As such, I do not understand why do you think it deals with the other kinds of
> addresses (non LL)?
> 
> Alex

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